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as the last petal falls onto silk sheets as the candles bloom with electricity as she shakes loose her virginity and beds her groom as his blood drains from his countenance doomed to her eyes her breasts her hips time and time again as the last petal falls from her pedestal pink roses of her youth his eyes still melt his heart beats fast his smile upticks until death consummates and pries the dynamic duo apart the shadow of roses falling she’s beyond the pale in the pink of blossoms beyond descriptive scent depth walking as if on rose water waiting seems but a moment for her seems like forever to him until forever after again

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Date: 3/13/2025 11:14:00 PM
"as the candles bloom with electricity' - the end is so deeo, Kim "forever after again"
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/17/2025 7:42:00 PM
Thank you, my dear friend!
Date: 3/6/2025 3:08:00 AM
Excellent verse. Happy weekend.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/6/2025 1:14:00 PM
Happy-ness to you, sweet friend!
Date: 3/3/2025 12:39:00 PM
Beautifully imagined, Kim! Best of luck in the contest. :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/6/2025 1:14:00 PM
Thank you, Evelyn!
Date: 3/3/2025 10:40:00 AM
- Romantic, Kim :) - GL in the contest :) - hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/6/2025 1:13:00 PM
Thank you, my friend! Hugs!
Date: 3/2/2025 5:11:00 PM
Lovely romantic words, Kim. Good luck in contest.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/6/2025 1:13:00 PM
Thank you, Ann!
Date: 3/2/2025 4:06:00 PM
Wow. Such a sensual gem. Sure to be a winner
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/6/2025 1:13:00 PM
Thank you, my friend!
Date: 2/28/2025 9:39:00 PM
From youth to old age till the last petal falls, she has been perfuming the air with her fragrance. Beautiful poem showing how a woman blossoms as a flower from her nuptial bed to her death bed. All the best, dear Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/1/2025 4:53:00 AM
Thank you, Valse! Blessings to you, sweet Valsa!
Date: 2/28/2025 2:30:00 PM
Beautiful poem Kim. The imagery is excellent. Good luck with the contest
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/28/2025 2:36:00 PM
Thank you, Oliver!
Date: 2/28/2025 10:40:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your lovely write. "Good Luck" Have a blessed day/weekend writing away...............
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/28/2025 1:18:00 PM
Thank you, sweet, Paula, my friend!

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