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As the Last Petal Falls

as the last petal falls
onto silk sheets
as the candles bloom
with electricity
as she shakes loose
her virginity
and beds her groom
as his blood drains
from his countenance
doomed
to her eyes
her breasts
her hips
time and time
again
as the last petal falls
from her pedestal
pink roses
of her youth
his eyes still melt
his heart beats fast
his smile upticks
until
death consummates
and
pries
the dynamic duo apart
the shadow of roses falling
she’s beyond the pale
in the pink
of blossoms beyond descriptive scent
depth
walking as if on rose water
waiting
seems but a moment for her
seems like forever to him
until forever after again
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Hind Avatar
March 13, 2025 at 11:14 PM
"as the candles bloom with electricity' - the end is so deeo, Kim "forever after again"
Rodrigues Avatar
April 17, 2025 at 7:42 PM
Thank you, my dear friend!
Buhagiar Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 3:08 AM
Excellent verse. Happy weekend.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 1:14 PM
Happy-ness to you, sweet friend!
Buehler Avatar
March 3, 2025 at 12:39 PM
Beautifully imagined, Kim! Best of luck in the contest. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 1:14 PM
Thank you, Evelyn!
Andresen Avatar
March 3, 2025 at 10:40 AM
- Romantic, Kim :) - GL in the contest :) - hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 1:13 PM
Thank you, my friend! Hugs!
Peck Avatar
March 2, 2025 at 5:11 PM
Lovely romantic words, Kim. Good luck in contest.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 1:13 PM
Thank you, Ann!
Dietrich Avatar
March 2, 2025 at 4:06 PM
Wow. Such a sensual gem. Sure to be a winner
Rodrigues Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 1:13 PM
Thank you, my friend!
George Avatar
February 28, 2025 at 9:39 PM
From youth to old age till the last petal falls, she has been perfuming the air with her fragrance. Beautiful poem showing how a woman blossoms as a flower from her nuptial bed to her death bed. All the best, dear Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 1, 2025 at 4:53 AM
Thank you, Valse! Blessings to you, sweet Valsa!
Mckeithan Avatar
February 28, 2025 at 2:30 PM
Beautiful poem Kim. The imagery is excellent. Good luck with the contest
Rodrigues Avatar
February 28, 2025 at 2:36 PM
Thank you, Oliver!
Goldsmith Avatar
February 28, 2025 at 10:40 AM
I enjoyed reading your lovely write. "Good Luck" Have a blessed day/weekend writing away...............
Rodrigues Avatar
February 28, 2025 at 1:18 PM
Thank you, sweet, Paula, my friend!
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