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As The Last Petal Falls

As the last 
petal 
      falls 
from the stem 
of 
    your beautiful heart, 

I will 
catch  
          it 
then own  
          in my hands,  

              the most 
        tenderest 
                       part  
of your 
          ALL !

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FJ Thomas Date: 3/4/2025 2:32:00 PM ...I know you do Vie :) I was happy to see you able to do something that brings you joy. Some here just need the occasional contest with a theme, not extensive formatting. Sometimes ;) Login to Reply Mystic Rose Rose Date: 3/4/2025 3:25:00 PM thank you for always being so supportive and never forgetting me F J, love

Sally Eslinger Date: 3/4/2025 3:58:00 AM Wow!Into the sight! Into the sad motion! Into the heart and hand feelng!Brought to the ineffable essence of life, death, Love…All the metaphor of the beloved as a flower! A magnificent poem, Vie. Sending you hugs, sally Login to Reply Mystic Rose Rose Date: 3/4/2025 3:26:00 PM thanks for reading and commenting dear Sally

Valsa George Date: 3/2/2025 9:21:00 PM Beautifully written in minimum words with maximum effect. All the best in the contest, dear Rose. Login to Reply Mystic Rose Rose Date: 3/3/2025 3:12:00 PM Thank you for appreciating Valsa

David Crandall Date: 3/2/2025 4:49:00 PM sweet, beautiful poem, that's the way to really write a love poem! Login to Reply Mystic Rose Rose Date: 3/3/2025 3:12:00 PM Thank you for your vote of confidence David

Joe Dimino Date: 2/28/2025 4:08:00 PM Very beautiful, Vie; love poetry a lost art that you revive so genuinely. Beautiful. Great read! Login to Reply Mystic Rose Rose Date: 2/28/2025 5:00:00 PM Your comments are valued Joe :)

FJ Thomas Date: 2/28/2025 3:13:00 PM So soft and tender, beautiful Vie. I am happy to see you hosting your own contest as well :) Login to Reply Mystic Rose Rose Date: 2/28/2025 5:00:00 PM I always loved doing them F J, I hope you join, love

Paula Goldsmith Date: 2/28/2025 10:46:00 AM I enjoyed reading your lovely write with a great picture. "Good Luck" Have a blessed day/weekend writing away............... Login to Reply Mystic Rose Rose Date: 2/28/2025 5:00:00 PM Glad you enjoyed it dear Paula, will come read your poetry soon love

Yann Rolland Date: 2/28/2025 7:33:00 AM wonderful poem, words are delicate and touching, i loved the design too have a nice sunday Login to Reply Mystic Rose Rose Date: 2/28/2025 4:59:00 PM Thank you for sharing your thoughts with me Yann

Tom Woody Date: 2/28/2025 6:22:00 AM Leaving this world is an inevitability. Leaving it with loved ones surrounding you is priceless. Nice poem rose Login to Reply Mystic Rose Rose Date: 2/28/2025 4:59:00 PM Leaving a legacy of love behind, for those you loved and always will, is the secret to a well lived life Tom. Love never dies