As the Choir Sings

we all gather
as if strung
in rows
outside 
the church

sad chatter
and echoes
of cries
fill the air
as music plays
in the distance

the wreaths
all neatly placed
with red bows
line the aisles
as we walk
onward
like little
toy soldiers
guided

there's a tree
off to the side
for christmas eve
silver bell services

in front of the alter
a casket awaits
our tears

scattered around
every turn
of this journey
are memories
in frames
that hold 
the only smiles
while the choir sings
inaudible songs
to pass the time

we embrace the past
with the present
as we stare
at a lifeless body
pressing our lips
against death
yet again
as december's breath
chills us from within

we are falling down
like trees
beneath the weight
of winter
shattered
and broken
the same
as icicles
pierce our hearts

we walk outside
with downcast eyes
following another
to their final resting place
beneath the barren soil
blind to the displays
of christmas cheer 
looming all around us
as we place a rose
atop the casket
then clasp our hands
in silent prayers

there is no spirit here
again this year....

written 12/15/2019
Darker Side of Christmas Poetry Contest
Judged 01/15/2020

Take the Dagger Out Contest
Sponsored by Dear Heart
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 2/22/2020 10:54:00 AM
Sandra, great entry and congratulations _Constance
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Date: 2/23/2020 8:08:00 PM
Thank you so much Constance... hugs
Date: 2/19/2020 12:02:00 PM
Sandra, nobody does this kind of poetry like you. My condolences for you in losing the person this was about. I love the lines "we embrace the past / with the present / as we stare / at a lifeless body." When we cry into our poetry, we bond with all those who have shed tears of loss. So glad to see this come in at #1 today. Hugs ~ John
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Date: 2/19/2020 1:22:00 PM
Thank you so much this one meant a lot to me when I wrote it for a contest and it got n/a’d so I was happy to see it standing in the winner’s list :) hugs
Date: 2/17/2020 11:17:00 PM
Congrats Sandra! There is such irony expressed here and such sadness described. A poem to remember.
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Date: 2/18/2020 9:14:00 AM
Thank you so much Sam... this one was a special one for me when I wrote it...it was true raw emotion going into it... hugs
Date: 2/17/2020 10:21:00 AM
Congrats on your placement in the contest my friend. I remember this one and how it touched me deeply.
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Date: 2/18/2020 9:13:00 AM
Thank you Chris... it was a special write for me...
Date: 2/17/2020 9:13:00 AM
Congrats on your second place in my second chance contest. Thanks for entering. ;0)
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Date: 2/18/2020 9:13:00 AM
Thank you so much Rick :) hugs
Date: 12/16/2019 9:52:00 AM
This is such a sad yet wonderful write.
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Date: 12/16/2019 11:05:00 AM
thank you...will be the scene later this week yet again i am afraid... hugs
Date: 12/16/2019 7:55:00 AM
Another beautifully written poem of sorrow and loss. I ache while reading your words. The loneliness is string and the sadness deeply felt. Best wishes in the contest my friend.
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Date: 12/16/2019 9:45:00 AM
thank you Chris...seems to be a part of christmas these years...hugs
Date: 12/15/2019 5:50:00 PM
A masterpiece for the contest. Truly poignantly and quite perfectly penned. Impressive! Warm wishes, Gershon
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Date: 12/15/2019 6:04:00 PM
Thank you Gershon....by now i should be a pro on death...and the darker side of life... hugs
Date: 12/15/2019 3:55:00 PM
Hi Sandra, This is such a sad and heart tugging write for the contest theme. Your chosen words caused your reader to be transported into the church with the mourners. It is hard to be Merry when we have lost a loved one. I wish you the best of luck in the contest- Alexis
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Date: 12/15/2019 6:03:00 PM
Thank you so much Alexis...i am used to it by now, death seems to like this time of year most... hugs
Date: 12/15/2019 3:19:00 PM
This is truly the darker side of life--even more devastating when in happens during festive season. Saddened feelings in every verse--a touching write, Sandy.
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Date: 12/15/2019 6:02:00 PM
Thank you Vijay...anymore it always seems to come near the holidays...i think last year there were a couple right before Christmas, i've lost count... my father in december years ago and another this year... hugs
Date: 12/15/2019 2:16:00 PM
Captivating imagery of Christmas,-devastating imagery of grief both marvelously done dearest, Sandra! Hugs xxx
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Date: 12/15/2019 2:31:00 PM
Thank you so much...another family member passed yesterday...it's the same thing wiping them all out...i have this too...i have a hard time being strong watching this enemy take one, after another, after another... hugs to you Demetrios XoXo
Date: 12/15/2019 2:11:00 PM
- ... you have described my feelings in this poem, Sandra - Best wishes in the contest and thanks for warm words in your S-mail :) - hugs // Anne-Lise
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Date: 12/15/2019 2:29:00 PM
Thank you my sweet friend...my father passed near christmas, last year another relative did, yesterday another did...it seems our church gatherings at this time of year are always the same sad events and no one wants to have good cheer.... still sending prayers your way... hugs to you Anne-Lise
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