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As the Choir Sings

we all gather as if strung in rows outside the church sad chatter and echoes of cries fill the air as music plays in the distance the wreaths all neatly placed with red bows line the aisles as we walk onward like little toy soldiers guided there's a tree off to the side for christmas eve silver bell services in front of the alter a casket awaits our tears scattered around every turn of this journey are memories in frames that hold the only smiles while the choir sings inaudible songs to pass the time we embrace the past with the present as we stare at a lifeless body pressing our lips against death yet again as december's breath chills us from within we are falling down like trees beneath the weight of winter shattered and broken the same as icicles pierce our hearts we walk outside with downcast eyes following another to their final resting place beneath the barren soil blind to the displays of christmas cheer looming all around us as we place a rose atop the casket then clasp our hands in silent prayers there is no spirit here again this year.... written 12/15/2019 Darker Side of Christmas Poetry Contest Judged 01/15/2020 Take the Dagger Out Contest Sponsored by Dear Heart

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Date: 2/22/2020 10:54:00 AM
Sandra, great entry and congratulations _Constance
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Sandra Adams
Date: 2/23/2020 8:08:00 PM
Thank you so much Constance... hugs
Date: 2/19/2020 12:02:00 PM
Sandra, nobody does this kind of poetry like you. My condolences for you in losing the person this was about. I love the lines "we embrace the past / with the present / as we stare / at a lifeless body." When we cry into our poetry, we bond with all those who have shed tears of loss. So glad to see this come in at #1 today. Hugs ~ John
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Date: 2/19/2020 1:22:00 PM
Thank you so much this one meant a lot to me when I wrote it for a contest and it got n/a’d so I was happy to see it standing in the winner’s list :) hugs
Date: 2/17/2020 11:17:00 PM
Congrats Sandra! There is such irony expressed here and such sadness described. A poem to remember.
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Date: 2/18/2020 9:14:00 AM
Thank you so much Sam... this one was a special one for me when I wrote it...it was true raw emotion going into it... hugs
Date: 2/17/2020 10:21:00 AM
Congrats on your placement in the contest my friend. I remember this one and how it touched me deeply.
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Date: 2/18/2020 9:13:00 AM
Thank you Chris... it was a special write for me...
Date: 2/17/2020 9:13:00 AM
Congrats on your second place in my second chance contest. Thanks for entering. ;0)
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Date: 2/18/2020 9:13:00 AM
Thank you so much Rick :) hugs
Date: 12/16/2019 9:52:00 AM
This is such a sad yet wonderful write.
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Date: 12/16/2019 11:05:00 AM
thank you...will be the scene later this week yet again i am afraid... hugs
Date: 12/16/2019 7:55:00 AM
Another beautifully written poem of sorrow and loss. I ache while reading your words. The loneliness is string and the sadness deeply felt. Best wishes in the contest my friend.
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Date: 12/16/2019 9:45:00 AM
thank you Chris...seems to be a part of christmas these years...hugs
Date: 12/15/2019 5:50:00 PM
A masterpiece for the contest. Truly poignantly and quite perfectly penned. Impressive! Warm wishes, Gershon
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Date: 12/15/2019 6:04:00 PM
Thank you Gershon....by now i should be a pro on death...and the darker side of life... hugs
Date: 12/15/2019 3:55:00 PM
Hi Sandra, This is such a sad and heart tugging write for the contest theme. Your chosen words caused your reader to be transported into the church with the mourners. It is hard to be Merry when we have lost a loved one. I wish you the best of luck in the contest- Alexis
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Date: 12/15/2019 6:03:00 PM
Thank you so much Alexis...i am used to it by now, death seems to like this time of year most... hugs
Date: 12/15/2019 3:19:00 PM
This is truly the darker side of life--even more devastating when in happens during festive season. Saddened feelings in every verse--a touching write, Sandy.
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Date: 12/15/2019 6:02:00 PM
Thank you Vijay...anymore it always seems to come near the holidays...i think last year there were a couple right before Christmas, i've lost count... my father in december years ago and another this year... hugs
Date: 12/15/2019 2:16:00 PM
Captivating imagery of Christmas,-devastating imagery of grief both marvelously done dearest, Sandra! Hugs xxx
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Date: 12/15/2019 2:31:00 PM
Thank you so much...another family member passed yesterday...it's the same thing wiping them all out...i have this too...i have a hard time being strong watching this enemy take one, after another, after another... hugs to you Demetrios XoXo
Date: 12/15/2019 2:11:00 PM
- ... you have described my feelings in this poem, Sandra - Best wishes in the contest and thanks for warm words in your S-mail :) - hugs // Anne-Lise
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Date: 12/15/2019 2:29:00 PM
Thank you my sweet friend...my father passed near christmas, last year another relative did, yesterday another did...it seems our church gatherings at this time of year are always the same sad events and no one wants to have good cheer.... still sending prayers your way... hugs to you Anne-Lise

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