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As Spring Awakens

Far in the distance voices are calling out her name. Grown weary of winter, she hears them exclaim, "Spring, please come early and rid us of the cold. We long to feel sunshine's touch in rays of gold!" She smiles, knowing that she's been sorely missed, then softly sighs as if by a lover she'd been kissed. It's time for her to rise, better to be early than late when summoned not by a clock or a calendar date. Spring's fingers will melt the last crystals of snow. Soon, peeking above ground, tulips begin to grow. Trees welcome budding leaves and birds are singing. It's the season of renewal and hope she's bringing. With but a wisp of her breath, valleys become lush. Gardens of colorful flowers painted with her brush. Children excitedly run through fields with bare feet, and bees drink nectar from each bloom they meet. After months of deep sleep, it's time for her to ascend, and engage Brother Winter over weather they contend. She'll still his hand from blowing winds from the north, and herald in a milder climate as she ventures forth. Her dressing gown replaced with suitable work clothes, she gets busy thawing streams that frigid winds froze. Then, she'll sing with robins and dance with daffodils. As Spring, it's her duty to restore life on verdant hills. February 25, 2023 ~ In Bloom Poetry Contest Sponsored by Joseph May

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Date: 3/7/2023 12:28:00 PM
So many delightful images Lin! A wonderful interplay between Spring and Winter. Somehow, Winter always, ultimately, gives in to spring. Delightfully expressed. Congratulations on your win! Blessings.
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Date: 3/7/2023 11:44:00 AM
We always ask "Spring, please come early and rid us of the cold". Wonderful write Lin, Congrats on your win
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Date: 3/7/2023 8:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write. She had been missed. She is coming soon with all the pretty flowers. Have a blessed day...............
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Lin Lane
Date: 3/7/2023 9:01:00 AM
It’s very springlike for me now. thanks, Paula.
Date: 3/6/2023 6:35:00 PM
Lin, a wonderful Spring awakening poem and great personification poem, congratulations on your win!
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Lin Lane
Date: 3/7/2023 9:00:00 AM
Thanks so much, Tania.
Date: 3/6/2023 6:14:00 PM
A lovely and well-crafted poem, Lin. Congratulations on your top-winning placement.
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Lin Lane
Date: 3/7/2023 8:59:00 AM
Thanks, Lasaad.
Date: 3/6/2023 3:29:00 PM
Nicely done Lin. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Lin Lane
Date: 3/7/2023 8:59:00 AM
Thanks, Linda.
Date: 2/26/2023 12:26:00 AM
Very beautiful, I have so much to learn,however as I read this I just enjoyed the flow of the poem, each line melts into the next so easily.
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Lin Lane
Date: 2/26/2023 8:37:00 AM
Thank you for such gracious comments, Aysha.
Date: 2/25/2023 7:24:00 AM
She sure is a welcome season Lin, lovely to see the landscape come alive again Good luck in the contest and hope you have a lovely weekend. Tom
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Lin Lane
Date: 2/26/2023 8:36:00 AM
Thanks, Tom. My weekend has been great and beautiful sunny skies. Temps in the 70s. I hope yours is delightful, too.

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