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As Snow Falls, Spring Falls

On my heart, a winter swathed palm Her spring flowers only right for When chill itself dons out windblown— Attached there by my faithful arm. Green there and here tell on you soft, Your story's places in the snow— While meek flakes sleep on my breastbone— From your heart, I shake only warmth. The spring's time to melt frozen gauze, My whisper in the landing seen On ice's shine to you, magical The winter sun— winter's end be, When the looking snow further falls— Our intercession, heart-to-heart.

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Sotto Poet

Date: 2/20/2024 12:55:00 PM

Dear Paige, Your poem displays a remarkable level of eloquence and sophistication, portraying the enduring nature of winter and the beauty of snow in a delectable and refined manner.

Christina Bowring

Date: 2/14/2024 12:40:00 PM

This is an amazing sonnet dear Paige and I find it so inspiring especially as I haven’t attempted one yet. Beautiful flow and such creativity with expertly crafted words. ‘From your heart, I shake only warmth ‘ ‘ when the looking snow further falls’ - loved these lines ! Exquisite. This was a real pleasure to read. Thank you. Blessings :):)

Anonomus Scorpio

Date: 2/13/2024 3:09:00 PM

The real gift in reading your work, is also knowing your friendship. This entire piece is a metaphor of how gifted you are, but also how nurturing. Reading it was like wrapping myself in a blanket of warm thoughts. In all of you always! A.S.

Yann Rolland

Date: 2/12/2024 10:20:00 PM

delicious and elegant poem for "enduring" winter and snow, thanks poet

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/12/2024 9:22:00 AM

a winter swathed palm… While meek flakes sleep on my breastbone…So sweet!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/11/2024 9:01:00 AM

Cool title for this one. My winter heart dearly looks forward to spring

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 2/11/2024 8:48:00 AM

an interesting, very pretty write - i particularly like the opening lines - your poems are always well crafted and intriguing :)

Silent One

Date: 2/10/2024 9:54:00 AM

Your lovely poem is a lyrical exploration of love, resilience, and the eternal cycle of life. It invites readers to reflect on the transformative power of nature and the enduring bonds that unite hearts across seasons and landscapes. You expressed it really well..

Ink Empress

Date: 2/10/2024 5:31:00 AM

How heartfelt is this dear paige, and so very soulful and descriptive with brilliant metaphors woven in the most poetic manner. I felt the lines “ Your story's places in the snow— While meek flakes sleep on my breastbone— From your heart, I shake only warmth.” awwn so sincere and touching! You really have a unique way of expressing and phrasing things which makes you authentic and stand out. Pleasure reading your work always! Sending you light today and always! Hope you are doing fine

Hiya Sharma

Date: 2/9/2024 10:41:00 PM

Gosh, this is such a deep and evocative poem, beautiful Paige.. Your wordsmithery is so artistic here as your way of phrasing emotions is so innovation.. "On my heart, a winter swathed palm" I love that opening! It speaks so much.. "Your story's places in the snow", " From your heart, I shake only warmth" Ah, such gorgeous tenderness here.. "My whisper in the landing seen on ice's shine to you" Wow, I absolutely loved reading this, a FAV indeed.. Keep writing and shining always!

Mat Ignacio

Date: 2/9/2024 8:05:00 PM

always such pleasure to read your work, the delicate control of your phrasings, the timing and rhythm - beautiful