As She Told Me About Her Flute

His flute would make flowers bloom
Bees would hum their song in the flute

To me there was music in his wavy breath
That aroused buds in my window garden

I would feel sparks in the flow of my blood
Life without him and his flute would be futile

Because he brought out music from his air
He was the most truthful this I believed 

The spring of my smile overwhelmed the flute
We made maddening love and got married 

The nectar from his breath on my lips
Made me shudder into a blue emptiness

I didn't realise this summer would be brief too
I would be destroyed by the underlying violence

My flowers of love turned wounds of abuse
The music worsened into verbal assaults

Passion of the flute shifted to my sister
One after another broken nests followed

I rue the moment I thought I had struck gold
Little did I realise it was a fool's gold
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19/11/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 12/2/2016 5:19:00 AM
OH....GREAT ....RICH WITH PAIN ......GREAT JOB AGAIN SIR.....
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/2/2016 8:35:00 PM
Thank you ... No need to say sir ... We are fellow poets ...
Date: 11/29/2016 5:59:00 AM
Such a beautiful poem, Probir. I truly placed this poem above my poem in the "Fool's Gold" contest. This poem is a poet's poem. Love and joy to my poetic friend.
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Date: 11/29/2016 11:11:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 11/28/2016 7:39:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Probir.
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Date: 11/28/2016 9:10:00 AM
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Date: 11/27/2016 8:15:00 AM
Hi Probir, Congratulations on your win. It was well deserved: ') Alexis
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Date: 11/28/2016 9:10:00 AM
Thank you, Alexis ...
Date: 11/27/2016 2:17:00 AM
Great poem, sir! I was sure it was going in one direction, then it shifted. Congrats!
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Date: 11/27/2016 5:05:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 11/26/2016 8:26:00 PM
Unique write. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 11/27/2016 5:06:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 11/26/2016 10:09:00 AM
Congratulations Probir...
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Date: 11/26/2016 7:55:00 PM
Thank you, Charlie ...
Date: 11/26/2016 9:44:00 AM
Back to congratulate you on your win, Hugs Eve
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Date: 11/26/2016 7:55:00 PM
Thank you, Eve ...
Date: 11/19/2016 3:36:00 PM
A bittersweet, tragically beautiful poem, Probir. I got me some tough competition for the Fool's Gold contest. This is a really wonderful poem, my poetic friend. The breadth of humanity is displayed well w/your pen. Love and many blessings.
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Date: 11/19/2016 7:37:00 PM
Thank you, Freddie ...
Date: 11/19/2016 2:11:00 PM
Oh this is so good, Probir, the change of moods from gay to heartfelt ... good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/19/2016 7:38:00 PM
Thank you, Eve ... You always encourage me ...
Date: 11/19/2016 1:26:00 PM
This is a slice of life as it can happen. The way it progresses is so very well orchestrated. I didn't expect this sort of ending. You reeled me in and then hit me over the head with this hammer. It least WE know how to behave, or should I speak only for myself?
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Date: 11/19/2016 7:44:00 PM
Thank you for your kind visit and the ponderable comment ... The line - limit set in contests poses a little problem ... may be the transition was a little sudden ... thank you so much ...
Date: 11/19/2016 1:12:00 AM
As always your writing goes deep into the soul exploring the unending possibilities of life! A profound writing dear , Probir!
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Date: 11/19/2016 11:19:00 AM
Thank you so much ... sorry for the disturbing 19/11 ...
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Date: 11/19/2016 11:18:00 AM
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