As Night Descends - a Rondelet

As night descends
God's paintbrush colours the night sky.
As night descends
purple, pink and violet blends.
An artist's mural floating by.
Beauty to bring tears to the eye,
as night descends.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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August 1, 2011 at 1:39 PM
Beautiful imagery here Francine...Congratulations on your win.
Brown Avatar
August 1, 2011 at 11:11 AM
Congratulations on your poem placing in Dr. Ram Mehta's " Rondelet" contest Francine. Love, Carol
Ramage Avatar
August 1, 2011 at 1:00 AM
Just love the line "An artist's mural floating by" just wonderful poetry. Thank you for a lovely evening. Lee
Johnson Avatar
July 31, 2011 at 8:57 PM
This is a great poem. congratulaitons Francine. Love, Joyce
Freeman Avatar
July 31, 2011 at 8:31 PM
Francine, Congratulations in the winner's circle. Agape, Moses
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July 31, 2011 at 6:37 PM
CONGRATULATIONS~~~~smile for the big placement~~~~*-*junjun
Devonshire Avatar
July 31, 2011 at 5:17 PM
So happy to see your poem in the winners' circle, Francine. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
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July 31, 2011 at 5:16 PM
Congrats Francine on your lovely win in the contest with this delicate piece luv..
Horne Avatar
July 31, 2011 at 4:03 PM
Awesome imagery. Many congrats, Francine : )
Dietrich Avatar
July 31, 2011 at 3:59 PM
wow, mural floating by, that 's so pretty! congrats on the win, Francine.
Ramsdale Avatar
July 31, 2011 at 2:34 PM
A Ronelet Contest Congratulations! Very nice. Have a peaceful day filled with blessings. Caryl
Mehta Avatar
July 31, 2011 at 2:13 PM
My congratulations on this win in my contest, Francine
Devonshire Avatar
July 22, 2011 at 9:06 AM
What a lovely image you paint of dusk, Francine. Love the way you used this form to create this picture. Beautiful entry for the contest and I'm sending winning wishes your way. Love, Carolyn
Williams Avatar
July 20, 2011 at 11:35 AM
hey Francine, this is great, good luck, David
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