As Night Descends

As night descends, the heavens celebrate, The birth of stars Through the tossing trees, They send down their toothless smiles The Moon too smiles with glee, Like a pleased mother. The Earth in darkness, Looking at the illumined sky, Follows suit and lights up Street lamps open their eyes, Flooding the cobalt streets. Neon bulbs blink from hidden homes Car lights dazzle like lightning Glow worms, like night sentries, Parade round with mini torches The roads ring with the sound of returning feet Fairies roam round for their nightly gambols Day laborers coil lazily to rest Letting their barbed distractions melt slowly away The dead in their sepulchers sleep peaceful! Among the muted murmurs, The cicadas’ sounds alone swell. This is the time for life and strife To lay their heads pillowed for serene sleep Under the blanket of a dim lit night! Nov.15. 2022 ~ Placed First~ Beauty of Night Poetry Contest Sponsor- Sotto Poet
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January 30, 2023 at 11:33 AM
A poem with exquisite craftsmanship. A lasting vitality. A huge round of applause for your fantastic win, Valsa. Sincere best wishes
Andresen Avatar
November 18, 2022 at 1:50 PM
- At night, anything can happen... when we sleep on our pillows - Beautiful, Valsa :) - Congratulations on your win :) -
Gasun Avatar
November 17, 2022 at 11:55 PM
You've captured the enchanting beauty of the night my dear friend Valsa. Congratulations on your first place win! Thanks for sharing this precious gem. God bless you always my dear friend. Hugs
Alex Avatar
November 17, 2022 at 8:12 PM
"This is the time for life and strife To lay their heads pillowed for serene sleep" - The entire poem is very beautiful. Congratulations!
Poet Avatar
November 17, 2022 at 5:13 PM
This winning piece has excellent lines, Valsa. Congratulations on winning first place in my contest.
Baker Avatar
November 16, 2022 at 3:49 PM
Nice entry, Valsa. You've described the beauty of night well, my friend. Good luck in the contest. Bill
Dietrich Avatar
November 16, 2022 at 11:22 AM
wow, you captured so much about night's beauty with this awesome poetry. I bet it places high!
Pandit Avatar
November 15, 2022 at 4:50 AM
Wonderfully descriptive poem, Valsa--bringing forth images of night. Lovely sights and sounds you convey.
Kendrick Avatar
November 15, 2022 at 4:11 AM
Oh!! Amazing work. Way to go. Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
Buhagiar Avatar
November 15, 2022 at 2:36 AM
How lovely you describe the night when all is calm. Stars shine brightly and we feel we're in heaven.
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November 14, 2022 at 11:57 PM
Very great, love it
Cunningham Avatar
November 14, 2022 at 11:25 PM
You captured the night well Valsa, I find nights rather peaceful. Best of luck. Tom
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