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As Night Approaches

when the sun is swallowed by the ocean
how i long to see your face
and pray the moon will rise



AP: Honorable Mention 2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Miller Avatar
July 4, 2022 at 8:19 AM
I love this one, I keep reading it over again!
Gauthier Avatar
July 4, 2022 at 10:43 AM
Thanks, Terry ~
Wolf Avatar
July 3, 2022 at 7:18 PM
Something very special about this one, Line. Wondrous imagery! :) gw
Gauthier Avatar
July 3, 2022 at 10:15 PM
thanks, Gershon ~ much appreciated.
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