As My Sad Tears Fall, Its Gown Glows a Fearsome Red

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Robert J. Lindley, 7-17-2018
Rhyme, (Dark And Ghostly Regrets)
Inspired by a dream, rather a recent nightmare I had....

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Total # Syllables: 216
Total # Words: 163

As My Sad Tears Fall, Its Gown Glows A Fearsome Red I simply can not write good poetry today yesterday's ghost haunts me and will not go away, on its torn black cap and red shoes are jingling bells in its raging red eyes are high, sea raging swells. Ruby ringed left hand, holds repugnant staff of wastes in its right, bucket of blood, begging bitter tastes! I simply can not write good poetry today last night's dreams, yesterday's persistent ghost yet stays replaying scenes that are chosen to break my heart, screaming, beautiful red roses were torn apart. As my sad tears fell, its gown glows a fearsome red casting curses upon lying words I once said. I simply can not write good poetry today yesterday's ghost haunts me and will not go away, on its torn black cap and red shoes are jingling bells in its raging red eyes are high, sea raging swells. Ruby ringed left hand, holds repugnant staff of wastes in its right, bucket of blood, begging bitter tastes! Robert J. Lindley, 7-17-2018 Rhyme, (Dark And Ghostly Regrets) Inspired by a dream, rather a recent nightmare I had....

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Susan Ashley

Date: 7/19/2018 9:02:00 PM

Dear Robert, your haunting emotions beautifully express your anguish in this poem inspired by a nightmare. Your deep and poignant imagery is captivating and moving. A great write! Warmest wishes always my wonderful friend.. ~Susan

Robert Lindley
Date: 7/20/2018 1:34:00 AM

Thank you my dear friend. Always a pleasure to read your words be they in your exceptional poetry, or your kind comments made!

Lyric Man

Date: 7/18/2018 3:52:00 AM

Robert, you more than write good poetry. You master the complex like this write. Producing a quality work where every line must be 12 syllables.. that's a skill I'll never posses.. much respect!

Lyric Man
Date: 7/18/2018 9:14:00 AM

Forgive my ignorance Robert but I didn't even know that was a thing or style.. I might try one on a vacation just to challenge myself!

Robert Lindley
Date: 7/18/2018 4:46:00 AM

Thank you very much my good friend. I have been writing 12 syllable verses for many decades now, so it is just old hat to me. I have a great many poems in my private journals written in 12 syllable verses.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/17/2018 6:58:00 AM

A nightmare can leave you feeling spooked for sure, but something good did come out of it, this well written verse. Tom.

Robert Lindley
Date: 7/18/2018 4:44:00 AM

Thank you my friend. Yes, dreams often inspire my poetry.. Yet do so less and less as I get older.

Charles Messina

Date: 7/17/2018 6:54:00 AM

Well, Robert. I beg to differ, you have wrote good poetry today! As you always do my friend. If we only knew what we dreamed of the day before we had the dream...wonderful write...All the Best...Charlie

Robert Lindley
Date: 7/18/2018 4:42:00 AM

Thank you my friend. I truly appreciate your kind and thoughtful words.