Heidi Sands Poet Rhyme

As Light As a Feather

The gurgling of the brook
Daisies swaying on the bank
As light as a feather I am, to look
Problems tossed with the stone that sank

The wind chime music, playing light
Jingling in the soft breeze of air
As light as a feather, I take flight
My mind is floating in ways I care

Clouds travel above me in the sky
Moving in patterns to see
As light as a feather, I watch them go by
Dreaming of places I want to be

Soft Dandelion seeds circle in wind from flowers
In an open field, where I am free
As light as a feather, like soft rain showers
In a ballet dance between each tree

As light as a feather, where I have peace of mind
As light as a feather, in these discoveries I find

Heidi Sands

7/30/22

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Beryl Edmonds August 5, 2022 at 10:28 AM So beautiful Heidi, a wonderful take on the theme of the contest. Blessings and best wishes… Belle :) Heidi Sands August 5, 2022 at 11:32 AM Thank you very much Belle :)

Michael Tor August 4, 2022 at 9:16 PM Love this beautiful write from you Heidi really enjoy reading. God bless you... Heidi Sands August 5, 2022 at 3:30 AM Thank you Michael. I appreciate your kind comment. Bless you :)

Sara Kendrick August 4, 2022 at 12:17 PM Ahhh!! I could just see a feather (down) floating down on a light breeze. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Your visit to my page was delightful. Sara Heidi Sands August 4, 2022 at 12:31 PM Thank you very much Sara. I hope you are having a nice day :)

Linda Alice Fowler August 2, 2022 at 6:07 AM I'n floating in your imagery Heidi...sights and sounds support your flight. Lovely poem! Linda Heidi Sands August 2, 2022 at 6:38 AM Thank you Linda :)

Harry Horsman August 1, 2022 at 8:08 PM You take one on a journey, your 'light as a feather,' is lovely Heidi. Heidi Sands August 2, 2022 at 4:12 AM Thank you Harry. I hope you have a nice day :)

Connie Marcum Wong August 1, 2022 at 7:22 PM Your words remind me a bit of soul travel Heidi, where worries can’t follow. Beautifully expressed! Blessings xxoo Connie Marcum Wong August 2, 2022 at 8:41 PM I am doing much better Heidi Thank you. How are you doing? Blessings xxoo Heidi Sands August 2, 2022 at 4:12 AM Yes. Thank you Connie. I appreciate your kind input. I hope all is well. :)

Valsa George July 31, 2022 at 7:08 PM Beautifully worded and doing full justice to the topic ! 'As light as as feather as problems tossed with the stone that sank' . Well done Heidi Heidi Sands August 1, 2022 at 4:22 AM Thank you very much Valsa. I appreciate your comment :)

Vijay Pandit July 31, 2022 at 9:39 AM The sound of the brook, the chime of the wind, the roaming cloud patterns, flowers whirling--simply beautiful images you convey in this poem, Heidi. A FAVE from me for these splendid sights and sounds you brought forth. Best to you. Heidi Sands July 31, 2022 at 9:53 AM Thank you so much Vijay. I appreciate your support and I am happy you consider it a FAVE. I hope you have a nice day :)

Mike Gentile July 31, 2022 at 4:57 AM Your poem does indeed evoke lightness Heidi and I most especially love "problems tossed with a stone that sank) What a perfect way to envision the unburdening of worries! happy Sunday xxoo Heidi Sands July 31, 2022 at 6:50 AM Thank you Mike. I appreciate your feedback Happy Sunday :)

Gershon Wolf July 30, 2022 at 8:59 PM 'As light as a feather' really works perfectly with your stanzas, Heidi. You have a 'Bullseye' on your hands here. Bravo, Gershon Heidi Sands July 31, 2022 at 6:49 AM Thank you very much Gershon. I hope you have a nice day :)