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As Light As a Feather

The gurgling of the brook Daisies swaying on the bank As light as a feather I am, to look Problems tossed with the stone that sank The wind chime music, playing light Jingling in the soft breeze of air As light as a feather, I take flight My mind is floating in ways I care Clouds travel above me in the sky Moving in patterns to see As light as a feather, I watch them go by Dreaming of places I want to be Soft Dandelion seeds circle in wind from flowers In an open field, where I am free As light as a feather, like soft rain showers In a ballet dance between each tree As light as a feather, where I have peace of mind As light as a feather, in these discoveries I find Heidi Sands 7/30/22

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Beryl Edmonds

Date: 8/5/2022 10:28:00 AM

So beautiful Heidi, a wonderful take on the theme of the contest. Blessings and best wishes… Belle :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/5/2022 11:32:00 AM

Thank you very much Belle :)

Michael Tor

Date: 8/4/2022 9:16:00 PM

Love this beautiful write from you Heidi really enjoy reading. God bless you...

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/5/2022 3:30:00 AM

Thank you Michael. I appreciate your kind comment. Bless you :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/4/2022 12:17:00 PM

Ahhh!! I could just see a feather (down) floating down on a light breeze. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Your visit to my page was delightful. Sara

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/4/2022 12:31:00 PM

Thank you very much Sara. I hope you are having a nice day :)

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 8/2/2022 6:07:00 AM

I'n floating in your imagery Heidi...sights and sounds support your flight. Lovely poem! Linda

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/2/2022 6:38:00 AM

Thank you Linda :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/1/2022 8:08:00 PM

You take one on a journey, your 'light as a feather,' is lovely Heidi.

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/2/2022 4:12:00 AM

Thank you Harry. I hope you have a nice day :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/1/2022 7:22:00 PM

Your words remind me a bit of soul travel Heidi, where worries can’t follow. Beautifully expressed! Blessings xxoo

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 8/2/2022 8:41:00 PM

I am doing much better Heidi Thank you. How are you doing? Blessings xxoo

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/2/2022 4:12:00 AM

Yes. Thank you Connie. I appreciate your kind input. I hope all is well. :)

Valsa George

Date: 7/31/2022 7:08:00 PM

Beautifully worded and doing full justice to the topic ! 'As light as as feather as problems tossed with the stone that sank' . Well done Heidi

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/1/2022 4:22:00 AM

Thank you very much Valsa. I appreciate your comment :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/31/2022 9:39:00 AM

The sound of the brook, the chime of the wind, the roaming cloud patterns, flowers whirling--simply beautiful images you convey in this poem, Heidi. A FAVE from me for these splendid sights and sounds you brought forth. Best to you.

Heidi Sands
Date: 7/31/2022 9:53:00 AM

Thank you so much Vijay. I appreciate your support and I am happy you consider it a FAVE. I hope you have a nice day :)

Mike Gentile

Date: 7/31/2022 4:57:00 AM

Your poem does indeed evoke lightness Heidi and I most especially love "problems tossed with a stone that sank) What a perfect way to envision the unburdening of worries! happy Sunday xxoo

Heidi Sands
Date: 7/31/2022 6:50:00 AM

Thank you Mike. I appreciate your feedback Happy Sunday :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/30/2022 8:59:00 PM

'As light as a feather' really works perfectly with your stanzas, Heidi. You have a 'Bullseye' on your hands here. Bravo, Gershon

Heidi Sands
Date: 7/31/2022 6:49:00 AM

Thank you very much Gershon. I hope you have a nice day :)