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Hiya's Leaves of Life Contest ~ 9/14/26

As Leaf and Love Lay Dying

A sweeping change covers the landscape
Autumn winds willfully weave tenebrous tunes
  through trees trying to hold fast to their leaves.
Elusive, the sorrowful songs it plays in concert
  to branches bravely bending and swaying.
Ghostly aspen bid goodbye to gowned limbs,
  groaning with guttural grievance ~
I hear their caterwauling wails
  always aware of the crime Nature calls "natural"
I watch as they're stolen, for I am the Eyes of Time
neither dusk nor dawn can delude me, 
  for I see the tragedy of thievery.

It's the same story when love is lost,
  tossed on wafts of wind, aloft ~ falling apart.
Heartbroken, I've felt the woeful withering
  of a leaf detached and tumbling down.
Losing love is a morose method of dying.
As trees cry a fond foliage of farewell, 
  I have shed torrents of tears 
    that fell from my erring eyes.
I regret words my tongue left unspoken
  as the leaf of life sleeps upon my lips, 
    in a dank, dormant place life can dwell.

Oh, fall, let this lore of love be the last 
I've bloomed as cunning Cupid nocked arrows
  and suffered blows from Nature's throes. 
I've felt the depth and breadth of death
  as if cast to wayward winds like leaves 
    whose swan song left them alone ~ forlorn
      lying on the ground as love's debris.
I've heard the siren's songs on a blithe breeze
  that brought me to bended knees
    and gave up dreams that remain unfulfilled.
No longer can I savor starlight
   for when the soul ~ stars dreams and die ~
       I become a leaf without wings to fly
          with no desire to linger again, 
            in the grim grasp of grief.
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Empress Avatar
September 14, 2026 at 11:05 PM
Funny thing about my life is, I am friends with all my exes, and they are all very protective about me ~ they know I was never a bad person. Except for one. Who is spiteful, and I forgive him, he knows no better. Your poem has so many brilliant lines. The alliterations, wordplay, as well as the assonance and the way youv personified etc is beyond impressive and shows skills of a talented wordsmith! I love the flow too! And the ending Pleasure reading this Im sure hiya will love this Sending you light always
Lane Avatar
September 15, 2026 at 5:12 AM
That’s another point we have in common and now that David is gone, I’m even more grateful that we rebuilt a friendship a few years ago. You are wise to move on from soured relationships. It does no one good to hold on to bitterness. Merci for your kind compliments. I really enjoy personifying even the most mundane things. 🦋❤️
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September 14, 2026 at 11:03 PM
Ah this is so poignant and profound dear linnersz, it has this wise voice and truth of a broken heart that I cant help but be in awe of. And resonate with. The worst thing about yes being heartbroken is not saying alot of things. However I am glad I have spoken my heart when necessary, said it all, and moved on. I felt so many lines here like "Losing love is a morose method of dying. As trees cry a fond foliage of farewell, " wow! That is soul hitting and powerful! So moving! I felt that ~
Lane Avatar
September 15, 2026 at 5:07 AM
Thanks, Ink. I loved Hiya’s 6 chosen phrase and was able to fit them all in, or so I think, into cohesive verses. Background serves a poet well when the need arises 💗
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