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as laughing children gather bright eggs from the grass. . . . a small rabbit hides

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/16/2015 11:20:00 AM
I'm gonna smile here. Poor wabbit. Got scared. SKAT
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Date: 4/8/2012 7:31:00 AM
a sweet imaging...Light & Love
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Date: 3/19/2012 8:24:00 PM
Cutesy, Andrea!...The moment in this is precious...Peter Cottontail just wanted a peak at all those Cadbury eggs he laid for the egg hunt! ha ha. Congrats...Gwendolen
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Date: 3/16/2012 4:56:00 AM
Congrats Andrea on your win.Loved this haiku.
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Date: 3/15/2012 4:08:00 PM
I once dressed as the easter bunny for the city of bridgeport LOL yup! Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 3/15/2012 2:03:00 PM
congrats Andrea on an HM for this sweet entry .. very visual imagery ..luv it..
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Date: 3/15/2012 1:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your super win in Brian's "Bakers Dozen" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/6/2012 9:03:00 AM
Cute poem. I watched Rylan picking easter egss out of the grass and the smiles were awesome. We have a resident jack rabbit and he hopped by and that was even a bigger thrill for him. love phyl
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Date: 3/3/2012 10:54:00 PM
laughing away... ha ha ha... i bet that bunny had no idea what was going on... Andrea, this is a very delightful image... cute and fun... I have many Easter memories... one where my entire family chased bunny to butcher them.........lol.................. kidding... this is not true.. my family only butchered chickens.. and pigs.. my dogs ate them bunnies.. ha ha.. guess i have many unhappy bunny stories... but, like a kid i laugh at them now. I can't wait for that egg hunt in my area. ta ta..pd
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Date: 3/3/2012 1:51:00 PM
A really cute Easter poem that brings a beautiful picture to mind. Love it. God Bless, JB
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Date: 3/3/2012 1:14:00 PM
Easter will soon be upon us, and reading your lovely Haiku reminds me when I hid the kids Easter Eggs. I miss those days, but there's always Grand Kids - Yippee :)
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Date: 3/2/2012 10:58:00 PM
Haiku is very interesting and I enjoyed yours esp the rabbit hiding...Patrick
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Date: 3/1/2012 7:03:00 PM
You have painted a lovely picture of Easter. I loved watching my nieces and nephew gather eggs when they were little.
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Date: 3/1/2012 6:13:00 PM
hey andie, this is a wonder of a 'ku... check the rules; i think our piece needs seasonal reference... the notes i placed in simply for info...winning huggs! :)
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Date: 3/1/2012 12:27:00 PM
I loved this sweet haiku : )
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Date: 3/1/2012 10:09:00 AM
This is a fun haiku, Andrea! Just in time for Easter and I really like how you made that rabbit hide, together with the eggs :) hugs to you sweetie!
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Date: 3/1/2012 8:11:00 AM
ah yes the old ashiond fun of an Easter egg hunt.. wonderful imagery Andrea.. perfect for upcoming season ..good luck in contest luv..
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Date: 2/29/2012 3:43:00 PM
you've painted a lovely picture here!
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Date: 2/29/2012 3:25:00 PM
Yummy says the bunny as he sniffs around. Is this chocolate I smell? And looks at the ground. I found, to my delight, something delicious. Chocolate, out of sight, someone's malicious! I hope this chocolate is here for me, cause I would sit, if it's not, very sadly! Please look away as I do a dastardly act. I'm going to eat this egg, even if it's for the cat! I hope your rabbit gets his chocolate this Easter Andrea! Do you have a chocolate egg to spare? For my Rabbit! Great Work on this poem
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Date: 2/29/2012 2:43:00 PM
amazing visual delight Andrea.. should be a winner for the contest /..good luck ... very imaginative piece.. I want a chocolate egg now..
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Date: 2/29/2012 1:46:00 PM
Your Haiku gives smiles Andrea , thank you for mine , Hugs and best wishes , Declan xxx
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Date: 2/29/2012 12:30:00 PM
So cute Andrea. Hope you are doing well today. Excellent write. Love, Carol
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