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As Laughing Children

as laughing children
gather bright eggs from the grass. . . .
a small rabbit hides

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Skat A

Date: 5/16/2015 11:20:00 AM

I'm gonna smile here. Poor wabbit. Got scared. SKAT

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/8/2012 7:31:00 AM

a sweet imaging...Light & Love

Gwendolen Song

Date: 3/19/2012 8:24:00 PM

Cutesy, Andrea!...The moment in this is precious...Peter Cottontail just wanted a peak at all those Cadbury eggs he laid for the egg hunt! ha ha. Congrats...Gwendolen

Kash Poet

Date: 3/16/2012 4:56:00 AM

Congrats Andrea on your win.Loved this haiku.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/15/2012 4:08:00 PM

I once dressed as the easter bunny for the city of bridgeport LOL yup! Congrad's Light & Love

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/15/2012 2:03:00 PM

congrats Andrea on an HM for this sweet entry .. very visual imagery ..luv it..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/15/2012 1:14:00 PM

Congratulations on your super win in Brian's "Bakers Dozen" contest Andrea. Love, Carol

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 3/6/2012 9:03:00 AM

Cute poem. I watched Rylan picking easter egss out of the grass and the smiles were awesome. We have a resident jack rabbit and he hopped by and that was even a bigger thrill for him. love phyl

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/3/2012 10:54:00 PM

laughing away... ha ha ha... i bet that bunny had no idea what was going on... Andrea, this is a very delightful image... cute and fun... I have many Easter memories... one where my entire family chased bunny to butcher them.........lol.................. kidding... this is not true.. my family only butchered chickens.. and pigs.. my dogs ate them bunnies.. ha ha.. guess i have many unhappy bunny stories... but, like a kid i laugh at them now. I can't wait for that egg hunt in my area. ta ta..pd

Judy Ball

Date: 3/3/2012 1:51:00 PM

A really cute Easter poem that brings a beautiful picture to mind. Love it. God Bless, JB

James Fraser

Date: 3/3/2012 1:14:00 PM

Easter will soon be upon us, and reading your lovely Haiku reminds me when I hid the kids Easter Eggs. I miss those days, but there's always Grand Kids - Yippee :)

Patrick Cornwall

Date: 3/2/2012 10:58:00 PM

Haiku is very interesting and I enjoyed yours esp the rabbit hiding...Patrick

Kevin Clark

Date: 3/1/2012 7:03:00 PM

You have painted a lovely picture of Easter. I loved watching my nieces and nephew gather eggs when they were little.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/1/2012 6:13:00 PM

hey andie, this is a wonder of a 'ku... check the rules; i think our piece needs seasonal reference... the notes i placed in simply for info...winning huggs! :)

Jack Horne

Date: 3/1/2012 12:27:00 PM

I loved this sweet haiku : )

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 3/1/2012 10:09:00 AM

This is a fun haiku, Andrea! Just in time for Easter and I really like how you made that rabbit hide, together with the eggs :) hugs to you sweetie!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/1/2012 8:11:00 AM

ah yes the old ashiond fun of an Easter egg hunt.. wonderful imagery Andrea.. perfect for upcoming season ..good luck in contest luv..

Ilene Bauer

Date: 2/29/2012 3:43:00 PM

you've painted a lovely picture here!

Russell Sivey

Date: 2/29/2012 3:25:00 PM

Yummy says the bunny as he sniffs around. Is this chocolate I smell? And looks at the ground. I found, to my delight, something delicious. Chocolate, out of sight, someone's malicious! I hope this chocolate is here for me, cause I would sit, if it's not, very sadly! Please look away as I do a dastardly act. I'm going to eat this egg, even if it's for the cat! I hope your rabbit gets his chocolate this Easter Andrea! Do you have a chocolate egg to spare? For my Rabbit! Great Work on this poem

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/29/2012 2:43:00 PM

amazing visual delight Andrea.. should be a winner for the contest /..good luck ... very imaginative piece.. I want a chocolate egg now..