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As It Appears

It may appear that I've lost my writing edge, less poems expressed here on display opening my heart and tears; but surely, you must know my words do flow along some journal lines releasing the feelings and emotions I find harder to express and reveal along with the poetry soup's appeal incapable to openly portray the visionary images that slip away. Oh, for lack of inspiration to sweep the cobwebs of old age as it creeps, nearing eighty now strength and enlightenment disemboweled, if only, time was on my side this inner self might no longer hide in the spaces my soul denies, as it appears.

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Date: 8/28/2024 3:48:00 PM
You have been missed DM, I was only thinking of you the other day when i wrote a poem about a rabbit - deffo not one for soup lol. there are many familiar faces missing the site no longer is the same and unfortunately admin dont follow their own rules or even reply to mails which doesnt entice me to write or be active on the site plus I am working on my next book so spend less and less time here hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/29/2024 11:05:00 AM
Thanks Jan, been a little disoriented with things of late, keep on writing.
Date: 8/28/2024 8:52:00 AM
We all get writer's block, occasionally. Still, scribble something every day. You might hit the jackpot.
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Date: 8/29/2024 11:05:00 AM
Thank you Victor, at least it wasn't as long some other gaps in time.

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