As If He Knew

He loved
his sisters and nephews and nieces
his friends, his enemies and Skittles
Neil Young and Hendrix and Dylan
LSU, the Astros, the Saints
crab boils and back-yard basketball
running the roads with his buddies...

Yes he loved
many things and hated very few
Like sitting up late and talking
about good music and bad movies
about prancing, primping pre-madonnas
about good and evil and wrong and right
about God, the Universe and human folly
about the why and when and what and where
with insight that defied his young years
as if he knew...

Oh yes he loved
trying anything he never tried
trying, almost desperately trying
to cram a whole lifetime
into twenty one years...

Oh how he loved, oh how he laughed
Oh how he sparkled and shined...

(Yet it was that faint tint of sadness,
a far off look, a tiny shake of the head
as if he knew...)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Johnson Avatar
August 7, 2016 at 8:52 PM
Well done and well won with these sadness filled words.
Scars Avatar
August 7, 2016 at 7:09 PM
Tim, congrats on your placement with this wonderful poem :)-luloo
U.D Palawon  Avatar
August 7, 2016 at 10:46 AM
Congrats on your win...enjoyed the read. :) Sunita
Smith Avatar
August 7, 2016 at 8:50 AM
Well done and congratulations Tim, having lived long enough to know more than one who had such a sense of their own mortality, I really identified with your piece, thanks for sharing it with me...
Neumann Avatar
August 7, 2016 at 4:35 AM
That makes me feel sad and grateful as well.
Haight Avatar
August 6, 2016 at 11:24 AM
So sad, Tim, but so powerfully written. Congratulations on your podium win in this Premiere Contest. Sandra
Lamoureux Avatar
August 6, 2016 at 9:49 AM
Way to go Tim! Congrats on your win in my contest.
Ryerson Avatar
August 9, 2016 at 9:09 PM
Thanks Richard! It's a true honor
Delacroix Avatar
February 14, 2014 at 1:29 PM
That is such a wonderful write, and dedication to your son! A very moving piece and so well written! Thank you for sharing this one, Tim! Precious!
Guzzi Avatar
November 25, 2013 at 2:43 PM
Oh Cher it sounds like James Dean were you describing a real person? Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
A   Avatar
November 20, 2013 at 9:48 PM
Tim, . Congratulations, thank you for the lovely entry. Goodnight. Luv~LINDA
Adams Avatar
October 10, 2013 at 5:34 PM
wow...this is beautiful and poignant...one can feel the sadness as it lingers through your words...he sounds like he was an awesome son...great tribute to him :)
Delaney Avatar
June 19, 2013 at 4:41 PM
Dear Tim A beautiful tribute poem. Wish their were words to say that would console. He does live on in these words of love and remembrance. Congratulations. SuZ
Morrison Avatar
June 13, 2013 at 6:07 PM
Great Write! I loved the way you finished this piece most of all. congrats Kim
Gooden Avatar
March 28, 2013 at 7:07 AM
I just love this poem. Those final lines are really loaded. Great poem.
Ougo Avatar
March 1, 2013 at 1:39 AM
Great write..there..beautiful :-)
Merryman Avatar
February 26, 2013 at 12:48 PM
This is a fantastic write, Tim! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
Eastman Avatar
February 26, 2013 at 7:13 AM
Amazing write... To the point and very powerfully written... I read it twice.
Andresen Avatar
February 25, 2013 at 3:17 AM
A very good poem to send to the contest and you won! - Congratulations! - Have a lovely new week! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
A   Avatar
February 24, 2013 at 9:36 PM
Tim, , thank you for SUPPORTING MY NEWEST contest...CONGRATULATIONS on your awesome win ;-) LINDA
Guzzi Avatar
February 24, 2013 at 3:23 PM
Wonderful write Tim exquiste Cher, & there's no time like the present to go back to college? Light & Love
Jones Avatar
February 23, 2013 at 7:47 PM
Tim this is a wonderful but heart wrenching poem..read it twice..reads like a eulogy. Lovely...sorry if it is a real loss in your life....donna
Kendrick Avatar
February 23, 2013 at 4:55 PM
Ahh!! Very expressive and emotive work.. A twist to the end that is unexpected..Enjoyed reading this one today...I hope that the signs of spring come to you soon..I like the long thin lines of the Cranes..I like the caws of the crows..The Great Blues silent floating in...I have never seen an Eagle in real life that must be a magnificent sight..We see the Ring Tail Hawk here..They are a beauty in flight..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Richards Avatar
February 23, 2013 at 3:18 PM
Ahhh....wow......this hits me with such emotion and heartache....how much like my own sons, twists my heart into a knot. I can feel how deeply this pain must be, one that will never go away. I do hope sharing it can help to cushion it gently.....little by little. :)
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