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October 14, 2023
PLaced 1st: As I Watch the Waves Crash Contest by Anoucheka Gangabissoon


 

As I Watch the Waves Crash

From precipice of memories, flashbacks nostalgic billow,
Thinking of you as I ruminate, adoring the views below,
Where waves oceanic dance, leaping on windy tempos,
Propagating ambitions of tides, vying pristine sea shore;

Rippling my thoughts, undulating with emotions of yore,
Mesmerized in recollections lovingly brought to fore,
Allured by longings unforgettable, yearning for more,
Of your covert smile, enamored in friendship and love.

Admiring beauty serene, negotiating crests and troughs,
Immersing in nature’s awe, despite hurricanes and storms,
Sailing on vigor of vitality, rowing with elation and joy,
We built on hope and pride, rising and falling with tides;

Adulating on apex of highs, descrying the lows of sighs,
Turning pages of life, enchanting our hearts and minds,
We watched seasons decaying, regenerating over time,
Recognizing, in failures we sow, seeds of success in life.

Though dreams of romance became nightmares of desires,
We retain treasured albums, forever moments inspired,
Of sacred truths unveiled, destinations exotic we sailed,
Of dreams magical reveled, of themes our passions made;

Hypnotizing me still, in glance of your glamorous smile,
As I rejoice in tenor of then, remorseful of final goodbyes,
Cherishing melodious sounds, echoing from arc of bygones,
Gleaming our separate horizons, hosting asunder dawns.
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Baker Avatar
November 16, 2023 at 8:52 PM
Congratulations on your contest win, Vijay. Your poem flowed so smoothly, and your imagery and descriptions were excellent, my friend. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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November 15, 2023 at 6:24 AM
Congratulations, Dear Vijay, on your top win with this stunning poetic piece. Your choice of words and images create an awe! Brilliant!
Bowring Avatar
October 22, 2023 at 7:43 AM
This is absolutely stunning dear Vijay. Every single line a masterpiece. So, so much conveyed within these exquisite poetic lines. Your poetry takes my breath away and I’m always in awe, like so many, who have the immense pleasure of enjoying your incredible talent. ‘Where waves oceanic dance, leaping on windy tempos’- how gorgeous is that! Loved it. Good luck in the contest. Hugs and admiration to you. Xx :):)
Pandit Avatar
November 9, 2023 at 6:02 AM
Much enjoyed reading your kind feedback, Christina. Glad you liked the poem. Many thanks.
Kannan Avatar
October 21, 2023 at 5:50 AM
Absolutely wonderful!!! Great imagery throughout and as always I loved your rich vocabulary... "Gleaming our separate horizons, hosting asunder dawns..." How deep!!! Thanks for sharing... straight to my favs...
Pandit Avatar
November 9, 2023 at 6:01 AM
Thank you Supraja--much appreciate your kind remarks --so special to receive your FAVE.
Williams Avatar
October 21, 2023 at 2:06 AM
Always in awe of your creative writing dear Vijay. A true wordsmith, your gold pen never runs dry. Awesome writing, I wish you all the best in the contest. Hugs
Pandit Avatar
October 21, 2023 at 4:52 PM
So glad to see you on my page, Maria. Many thanks for your kind remarks, my friend.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 20, 2023 at 3:57 PM
flashbacks nostalgic billow… your covert smile… Sailing on vigor of vitality, rowing with elation and joy, We built on hope and pride, rising and falling with tides… Recognizing, in failures we sow, seeds of success in life…A romantic write and shows a mature season of time in your life! Nice, Vijay!
Pandit Avatar
October 21, 2023 at 4:51 PM
Much appreciate your visit and comments, my friend. Many thanks, Kim.
Riabi Dziri Avatar
October 20, 2023 at 8:35 AM
Standing still on shore.. beholding in awe waves crashing.. reminiscing about what brings life to soul.. Love is always there sailing on oceans.. surfing waves.. clinging to winds.. the magic of Nature widens the smile.. deepens the longing and passion.. embellishes the seasons and lessens the weigh of time.. and your avid reader being here rejoicing all this wonder and artistry! Dear Vijay you ever amaze! Your poetry is always a treat to read! God bless you. Best regards.
Pandit Avatar
October 21, 2023 at 4:50 PM
Thank you my friend. Always appreciate and value your comments, Besma, Much appreciate you visit.
M  Avatar
October 19, 2023 at 2:36 PM
Vijay you never fail in creating such wonderful poetic works of art….mesmerising beautiful poem! Debx
Pandit Avatar
October 20, 2023 at 7:39 AM
Thank you my friend--much appreciate.
Situation Avatar
October 18, 2023 at 7:10 PM
Engaging.
Pandit Avatar
October 20, 2023 at 7:38 AM
Thanks.
Sharma  Avatar
October 18, 2023 at 6:55 AM
As I watched the waves crash in the very imageries of this impeccable poem, my heart felt swathed with a plethora of emotions coming to the surface. Your takes for contests are ever so spectacular and this one's no exception.. Your vocabulary, wordplay and the sublime choices of rhymes.. Just wow and impeccable! I've certainly become your fan and this poem comes with a very nostalgic and emotive feels.. "Though dreams of romance became nightmares of desires" But still we cherish those moments..
Pandit Avatar
October 18, 2023 at 8:19 AM
Thoughtful and meaningful--your feedback is always a joy to behold, Hiya. So very insightful and eloquent--something I always look forward to. Much appreciate your rewarding presence on my page and on Soup. Many thanks for your comments and special thanks for your FAVE.
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October 18, 2023 at 6:56 AM
And learn our lessons before going on our future expeditions sailing towards the arcs of life.. "Gleaming our separate horizons, hosting asunder dawns" That's a very profound expression.. A FAV for me this is, really loved reading it, as always! - Regards!
Daniel Avatar
October 17, 2023 at 10:21 PM
Really awesome, Vijay, nostalgic memories rekindled:)
Pandit Avatar
October 18, 2023 at 8:13 AM
Thank you my friend, Much appreciate your visit and comments, Jo.
May Avatar
October 16, 2023 at 4:39 PM
Crashing waves bring back memories of romance, and its highs and lows, Well written Vijay
Pandit Avatar
October 17, 2023 at 8:52 AM
Many thanks for your kind feedback Joseph. Much appreciate, as always.
Y. Avatar
October 16, 2023 at 9:23 AM
WoW! Vijaya, Your skillful and poetic pen penned such a beautiful scene. I enjoyed it from start to finish. Excellent job. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful day;-) Alexis
Pandit Avatar
October 17, 2023 at 8:51 AM
Thank you my friend. Much appreciate your thoughtful remarks, Alexis.
Gentile Avatar
October 16, 2023 at 4:23 AM
Vijay, I love the backdrop of the crashing waves emulating the rise and fall of thoughts and feelings! Your romantic style shines though in beautiful expression!! Happy Monday!!
Pandit Avatar
October 17, 2023 at 8:51 AM
Glad to see you again, Mike. Much appreciate, my friend. Many thanks.
Poet Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 11:30 AM
Your golden pen never fails to produce splendid poems, as expected. Dear Vijay, your words evoke such strong emotions that they seem to come alive, like the continuous waves of an immense ocean. The collision of memories in this poem creates an everlasting bond with the heart, capturing the essence of a lost romance and the lingering memories that remain within us. This is a fave for me. Blessings
Pandit Avatar
October 18, 2023 at 7:14 AM
Special thanks for your FAVE my friend.
Pandit Avatar
October 17, 2023 at 8:50 AM
Much appreciate, as always, my friend. Always a joy to read your detailed remarks. You spread goodwill on Soup with thoughtful insights, Lasaad. Many thanks for your valued feedback.
DiMino Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 6:45 AM
"Allured by longings unforgettable, yearning for more, Of your covert smile, enamored in friendship and love." Love it! "Sailing on vigor of vitality, rowing with elation and joy, We built on hope and pride, rising and falling with tides;" Outstanding! So much I wish I could go back and change...should have knew then what honor and treasure it is to have been freely given another's love. Nothing more precious we own and can share.
Pandit Avatar
October 17, 2023 at 8:47 AM
I know what you mean, my friend. Always good to look back and reflect. Much appreciate your thoughtful feedback, Joe. Many thanks.
Buhagiar Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 3:53 AM
Memories, imagery, and emotions all come to the fore. A splendid poem as to be expected from your golden pen. Blessings.
Pandit Avatar
October 17, 2023 at 8:46 AM
So special to hear that from you Victor. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks.
Nicole Avatar
October 14, 2023 at 7:58 PM
While emotions emerge, moments seem to stay in motion, just like waves of the ocean. Memories collide, forever embracing the heart. This is so beautifully expressed and presented. I can feel the tender longing within. My best to you, Vijay. Hugs, Brandy
Pandit Avatar
October 17, 2023 at 8:45 AM
I am always in debt of your visits and heartfelt feedback my friend. Much appreciate, Brandy. Many thanks. Hugs to you as well.
Goldsmith Avatar
October 14, 2023 at 3:00 PM
A wonderful write. Your golden pen was working overtime. Good Luck... Have a blessed weekend..........
Pandit Avatar
October 17, 2023 at 8:44 AM
So nice of you to say so, Paula. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks.
Buehler Avatar
October 14, 2023 at 1:04 PM
So lovely and captivating throughout, Vijay! The final two verses are my favorites. Best of wishes for the contest.
Pandit Avatar
October 17, 2023 at 8:41 AM
So very kind of you as always, my friend. Many thanks for your worthy feedback, Evelyn.
Empress Avatar
October 14, 2023 at 6:46 AM
Your way with words always leave me speechless in awe! So. Captivating and flows with such descriptive diction! Exquisite imagery and thoughts woven in sheer eloquence. Absolutely love this one! Especially the opening lines that drew me in! And also how you’ve used such oceanic wordplay! I can see through your lines the serenity you admire, and sounds of waves crashing, so blissful! “ Hypnotizing me still, in glance of your glamorous smil” so heartfelt! Awwn! Love this! A fave for me this is!
Pandit Avatar
October 17, 2023 at 8:40 AM
I am in awe of your energy and insights gracing everywhere you visit and comment. Your enthusiasm deserves to be emulated and lauded. Precious are your kind remarks and your FAVE. Many thanks, Ink.
Jones Avatar
October 14, 2023 at 5:37 AM
Oceanic dance leaping jumps in my mind. This is full of wonderful imagery and emotions. I am impressed by your word choice and the energy of this poem like the ocean runs soulfully deep. You will surely win placement. Good luck!
Pandit Avatar
October 17, 2023 at 8:36 AM
So glad to see you Karen. I appreciate your kind remarks and your vote of confidence. Many thanks for stopping by.
One Avatar
October 14, 2023 at 4:39 AM
You write your poetry with so much imagery in your verses.. I really love this stanza.. Adulating on apex of highs, descrying the lows of sighs, Turning pages of life, enchanting our hearts and minds, We watched seasons decaying, regenerating over time, Recognizing, in failures we sow, seeds of success in life.... This will do great in the contest..
Pandit Avatar
October 17, 2023 at 8:35 AM
I always cherish your visits and kind words my friend. Much appreciate your presence on my page and on Soup. Many thanks, SO.
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