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As I Was Walking In the Snow

As I was walking in the snow I met my friend of the Harrow He struggled with the rat That sat upon his hat Tasting the toasted marshmallow February 17, 2018 As I was Walking in the Snow - Poetry Contest Sponsored by : Kevin Shaw

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Roy Pett

Date: 2/22/2018 11:03:00 AM

Great limerick Probir, I could imagine this certainly put a smile on my face, thank you. G L in contest. :))

Eve Roper

Date: 2/18/2018 9:15:00 AM

I love this wonderful rhyme verse.. Good luck in the contest... Hugs Eve ~`*

Probir Gupta
Date: 2/18/2018 10:37:00 PM

Thank you ... You say it rhyme verse ... Hasn't been a Limerick then? ...

Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 2/18/2018 12:17:00 AM

Delicious and witty one Probir; Good luck in the contest!~Che :)

Probir Gupta
Date: 2/18/2018 1:08:00 AM

Thank you, Cheryl ...

Jean Murray

Date: 2/17/2018 2:46:00 PM

I want a toasted marshmallow!!

Probir Gupta
Date: 2/17/2018 9:11:00 PM

Well, Jean, if you really want to have// You've to visit the astrologer's lab// That will calculate// Kevin's mind and plate// And will ensure you can hail the cab ...

Silent One

Date: 2/17/2018 9:15:00 AM

Haha... Great humour Probir..

Probir Gupta
Date: 2/17/2018 9:13:00 PM

Thank you, Silent ...

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/17/2018 8:07:00 AM

- A great one, Probir :)) - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Probir Gupta
Date: 2/17/2018 9:13:00 PM

Thank you, Sunshine ...