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As I Drift

writing as I drift

   on the ocean's endless blue. . . 

                     my soul over        flows

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John Read

September 1, 2023 at 1:49 AM

Nice one Andrea well done in the contest.

Arlo Parker

August 24, 2023 at 8:41 PM

Yep, captured that moment!!! :o)

Matt Caliri

August 24, 2023 at 8:20 PM

Very nicely done, Andrea! You are awarded with 14th place out of 71 entries! Woohoo!

Valerie Staton

January 27, 2019 at 7:02 AM

Very well written!

Connie Marcum Wong

November 20, 2016 at 1:30 AM

Congratulations on this trophy win. So deserving my friend! I loved your entry...sorry this is belated. ; ) 7

Anu Nayak

November 8, 2016 at 12:07 PM

Dear Andrea, awesome haiku, Congratulations on top win!//love,Anu:)

Francis J Grasso

November 6, 2016 at 12:06 AM

Beautiful, Andrea! Congratulations on top honors! ...Fran

Sandra Haight

November 5, 2016 at 5:10 PM

A very powerful Haiku imaged through a powerful metaphor, Andrea. Congratulations on your First Place Trophy win! Hugs, Sandra

Joyce Johnson

November 5, 2016 at 11:57 AM

CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WIN YET AGAIN. lOVE, jOYCE

Ironic Zink

November 5, 2016 at 10:35 AM

Great write Andrea! I was wondering why I keep getting the ole N/A... now I know! Nicely done!

Janice Canerdy

November 5, 2016 at 10:30 AM

A 7 for this top-winning poem, Andrea! Janice

Agnes Krampe

November 5, 2016 at 7:59 AM

Beautiful, Andrea. Congrats on your top win. Agnes

Elaine George

November 5, 2016 at 3:35 AM

Sensational Haiku, Andrea. Many congratulations on your great top-notch win. Lainey

Madeleine Mclaughlin

November 5, 2016 at 2:44 AM

I like the breakup of the word over flows, it adds another dimension to the poem, congrats of numero uno.

Mark Martin

November 5, 2016 at 2:06 AM

Nice haiku - congrats

Skat A

May 16, 2015 at 11:38 AM

my bad I meant to say. I feel not fell.

Skat A

May 16, 2015 at 11:37 AM

i fell the endless feeling

Estela Canama

May 3, 2014 at 4:34 AM

Wonderful haiku. Congrats Andrea!

Phyllis Babcock

May 2, 2013 at 9:05 AM

This is a beautiful haiku Andrea

Tahera Mannan

April 25, 2013 at 10:42 PM

Beautiful. Congrats for this great win.

Suzanne Delaney

April 25, 2013 at 7:20 PM

Congrats Andrea: I loved this one from the start. SuZ

Poet Destroyer A

April 24, 2013 at 8:06 PM

Andrea, a nice winning Ku' poem... Congratulations in Heather's lovely haiku contest. xox~ Linda

Heather Ober

April 24, 2013 at 11:08 AM

This is a gem - such creative and unique imagery, and that last line is golden! Congrats on your top spot in my contest :)

Afroze Ali

April 24, 2013 at 4:14 AM

wow!!! couldn't be more perfect...

Goodness Lanre

April 24, 2013 at 12:58 AM

congrats Andrea. Perfect haiku perfect imagery. Lots of love.

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