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As I Drift

writing as I drift

   on the ocean's endless blue. . . 

                     my soul over        flows

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John Read

Date: 9/1/2023 1:49:00 AM

Nice one Andrea well done in the contest.

Arlo Parker

Date: 8/24/2023 8:41:00 PM

Yep, captured that moment!!! :o)

Matt Caliri

Date: 8/24/2023 8:20:00 PM

Very nicely done, Andrea! You are awarded with 14th place out of 71 entries! Woohoo!

Valerie Staton

Date: 1/27/2019 7:02:00 AM

Very well written!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 11/20/2016 1:30:00 AM

Congratulations on this trophy win. So deserving my friend! I loved your entry...sorry this is belated. ; ) 7

Anu Nayak

Date: 11/8/2016 12:07:00 PM

Dear Andrea, awesome haiku, Congratulations on top win!//love,Anu:)

Francis J Grasso

Date: 11/6/2016 12:06:00 AM

Beautiful, Andrea! Congratulations on top honors! ...Fran

Sandra Haight

Date: 11/5/2016 5:10:00 PM

A very powerful Haiku imaged through a powerful metaphor, Andrea. Congratulations on your First Place Trophy win! Hugs, Sandra

Joyce Johnson

Date: 11/5/2016 11:57:00 AM

CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WIN YET AGAIN. lOVE, jOYCE

Ironic Zink

Date: 11/5/2016 10:35:00 AM

Great write Andrea! I was wondering why I keep getting the ole N/A... now I know! Nicely done!

Janice Canerdy

Date: 11/5/2016 10:30:00 AM

A 7 for this top-winning poem, Andrea! Janice

Agnes Krampe

Date: 11/5/2016 7:59:00 AM

Beautiful, Andrea. Congrats on your top win. Agnes

Elaine George

Date: 11/5/2016 3:35:00 AM

Sensational Haiku, Andrea. Many congratulations on your great top-notch win. Lainey

Madeleine Mclaughlin

Date: 11/5/2016 2:44:00 AM

I like the breakup of the word over flows, it adds another dimension to the poem, congrats of numero uno.

Mark Martin

Date: 11/5/2016 2:06:00 AM

Nice haiku - congrats

Skat A

Date: 5/16/2015 11:38:00 AM

my bad I meant to say. I feel not fell.

Skat A

Date: 5/16/2015 11:37:00 AM

i fell the endless feeling

Estela Canama

Date: 5/3/2014 4:34:00 AM

Wonderful haiku. Congrats Andrea!

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 5/2/2013 9:05:00 AM

This is a beautiful haiku Andrea

Tahera Mannan

Date: 4/25/2013 10:42:00 PM

Beautiful. Congrats for this great win.

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 4/25/2013 7:20:00 PM

Congrats Andrea: I loved this one from the start. SuZ

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/24/2013 8:06:00 PM

Andrea, a nice winning Ku' poem... Congratulations in Heather's lovely haiku contest. xox~ Linda

Heather Ober

Date: 4/24/2013 11:08:00 AM

This is a gem - such creative and unique imagery, and that last line is golden! Congrats on your top spot in my contest :)

Afroze Ali

Date: 4/24/2013 4:14:00 AM

wow!!! couldn't be more perfect...

Goodness Lanre

Date: 4/24/2013 12:58:00 AM

congrats Andrea. Perfect haiku perfect imagery. Lots of love.

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