Linda Alice Fowler Poet Rhyme

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As I Dream

Quiet moments of our deep love
trickling through the evening rivulet of moon
alight as softly as the dove
	…as I dream

Your breath so close to my face
fervently seeking passion’s safe harbor
leading your lips and setting the pace
	…as I dream

Your bold touch fulfilling its dearth
charting the curvatures of my being
docks as a ship finding her berth
	…as I dream

I quicken and offer safe port
inviting your entry and sheltered mooring
as in true life, I am your willing consort
	…as I dream

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Len Gasun January 19, 2023 at 2:55 PM Passionately romantic write crafted creatively by your golden pen my dear friend Linda. Congratulations on your win and this stellar piece! Thanks a lot for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs Linda Alice Fowler January 19, 2023 at 3:14 PM Thank you dear Len. hugs :)

Valsa George January 19, 2023 at 8:09 AM 'A ship charting the curvatures of the body'.....very sensuous description! The coming together of two souls through love making....is amorously depicted ! Great poem Linda! Congratulations on your win. Linda Alice Fowler January 19, 2023 at 8:20 AM Many thanks Valsa :)

Paula Goldsmith January 18, 2023 at 8:05 AM Congratulation on your win. A lovely write/picture. Have a blessed day................. Linda Alice Fowler January 19, 2023 at 6:28 AM Thank you Paula! hugs :)

Caren Krutsinger August 17, 2022 at 12:07 AM I love the consistency of this excellent super romantic write - I wanted to use the word exquisite but Susan beat me to it! Linda Alice Fowler August 17, 2022 at 6:30 AM You are so kind Caren. Thank you for the lovely comments about this poem. I'm grateful for your visit and time to read. You and Susan are dear reviewers! Linda

Susan Ashley August 7, 2022 at 4:17 PM Dear Linda, your exquisite poem surrounds me with dreamy beauty. A sensual metaphorical gem that shines in my heart and imagination. “Your bold touch fulfilling its dearth / charting the curvatures of my being / docks as a ship finding her berth” sublime sexy artistry! I adore your splendid pen. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you.. ~Susan Linda Alice Fowler August 8, 2022 at 5:19 AM Hello Susan. I am most flattered by your visit and comments on this poem. I value your opinion. Many thanks, Linda

Tom Cunningham August 7, 2022 at 11:28 AM Quite a romantic dream you had Linda, good luck in the contest and enjoy your week ahead. Tom Linda Alice Fowler August 7, 2022 at 11:35 AM Many thanks Tom. And a pleasant week for you as well. Linda