As I Dream

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Quiet moments of our deep love
trickling through the evening rivulet of moon
alight as softly as the dove
	…as I dream

Your breath so close to my face
fervently seeking passion’s safe harbor
leading your lips and setting the pace
	…as I dream

Your bold touch fulfilling its dearth
charting the curvatures of my being
docks as a ship finding her berth
	…as I dream

I quicken and offer safe port
inviting your entry and sheltered mooring
as in true life, I am your willing consort
	…as I dream

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Len Gasun

Date: 1/19/2023 2:55:00 PM

Passionately romantic write crafted creatively by your golden pen my dear friend Linda. Congratulations on your win and this stellar piece! Thanks a lot for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 1/19/2023 3:14:00 PM

Thank you dear Len. hugs :)

Valsa George

Date: 1/19/2023 8:09:00 AM

'A ship charting the curvatures of the body'.....very sensuous description! The coming together of two souls through love making....is amorously depicted ! Great poem Linda! Congratulations on your win.

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 1/19/2023 8:20:00 AM

Many thanks Valsa :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/18/2023 8:05:00 AM

Congratulation on your win. A lovely write/picture. Have a blessed day.................

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 1/19/2023 6:28:00 AM

Thank you Paula! hugs :)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/17/2022 12:07:00 AM

I love the consistency of this excellent super romantic write - I wanted to use the word exquisite but Susan beat me to it!

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 8/17/2022 6:30:00 AM

You are so kind Caren. Thank you for the lovely comments about this poem. I'm grateful for your visit and time to read. You and Susan are dear reviewers! Linda

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/7/2022 4:17:00 PM

Dear Linda, your exquisite poem surrounds me with dreamy beauty. A sensual metaphorical gem that shines in my heart and imagination. “Your bold touch fulfilling its dearth / charting the curvatures of my being / docks as a ship finding her berth” sublime sexy artistry! I adore your splendid pen. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you.. ~Susan

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 8/8/2022 5:19:00 AM

Hello Susan. I am most flattered by your visit and comments on this poem. I value your opinion. Many thanks, Linda