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Just pondering life!

As I Awoke:

Upon the rise from my slumber this morning, I could not help but continued on yawning. Another fine Summer's day I thought to myself, A grateful soul I am for still having my health. Straight away I thought of writing poetry all day, But my mind still hazy, what would I say? So I sat at my desk with pen and paper at hand, Waiting for my mind and thoughts to expand. Then without a clue, I started writing to you, Try to share my emotions was the best I could do. So as my pen wrote down words that I just couldn't find, Leaving me at peace to explore my own mind. I know we have never really met face to face, The best we can do is connect in cyberspace. But as a soul that struggles alone day by day, I just needed this opportunity to honestly say. I've never been one to act like a drama queen, Nor am I one to create an unwanted scene. Apart from my own personal problems and faults, I know we have all had our own fair share of assaults. And one day when the Sun fades and dissipates, We shall all learn after all of our own fates. Until that day we shall still share this place, And read each other's poetry with a smile on our face.
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Ricci Avatar
March 21, 2017 at 4:34 AM
Morning White Wolf. So let it be said So let it be written So let it be done. I think we all second your beautiful inspiring thoughts. Always is it a perfect and right time to write and share. This entry is lovely and true. It was a pleasure to turn to this entry today. Well done entirely.
Wolf Avatar
March 21, 2017 at 5:57 AM
Thank you, Lisa! You always leave such wonderful comments, and I appreciate it. Well, it's late here now, so I'll pop by yours in the morning. /|\
Hamilton Avatar
February 22, 2017 at 3:20 PM
Great writing Rick and so true! Keep em coming!
Bennett Avatar
February 12, 2017 at 10:06 PM
Awesome !!
Burch Avatar
February 2, 2017 at 5:19 PM
Well done Wolf!! ;) keep writing!!! Big Hugggs!!! Deb
Wolf Avatar
February 2, 2017 at 6:32 PM
I'll try my best! Haha, Thanks, Deb! /|\
Green Avatar
February 2, 2017 at 1:57 PM
I really liked this Rick. It's hard for me to tell exactly but my guess is this is written to one person, someone special you look forward to visiting with each day. But I could be wrong, it could be written to everyone here. Either way, you did a great job with this. Bravo my friend.
Wolf Avatar
February 2, 2017 at 4:06 PM
It was written to you all, Chris! I appreciate each and every one of you and enjoy being a part of this wonderful site, Thank you my friend! /|\
Andresen Avatar
February 2, 2017 at 7:30 AM
- Beautiful thoughts to share, lovely W.W. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Wolf Avatar
February 2, 2017 at 4:03 PM
Thank you very much, Anne-Lise /|\
Herlihy Avatar
February 2, 2017 at 2:46 AM
What charming couplets, chuck full of simple truths. And yes, I fully agree, with the exchange of such poetry, deep cyber-friendships do exist and grow with the days of which you write. JH
Wolf Avatar
February 2, 2017 at 2:49 AM
What would we do without the soup! /|\
White Avatar
February 2, 2017 at 1:16 AM
I agree, we connect in cyberspace, but never believe the people that say that friendship or connection through that medium is not real friendship. They are wrong!
Wolf Avatar
February 2, 2017 at 1:20 AM
So true! Duir! So true! /|\
Daniel Avatar
February 2, 2017 at 1:06 AM
Ha ha, I agree with you here, White Wolf:):) enjoyed this thoroughly:)
Wolf Avatar
February 2, 2017 at 1:11 AM
Thank you, Jo /|\
Vaso Avatar
February 1, 2017 at 11:27 PM
Very well said!
Wolf Avatar
February 1, 2017 at 11:30 PM
Thank you, Arthur, this is the kind of poem you post when you have nothing better to do! Haha. /|\
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