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As Hurricane Comes

As the maddening tempest darkens, This gusty night threatens my vulnerability, When a deluge of woe gushes from a stormy heart To reflect a tinge of foreboding, of a growing boom-- The ebon cloudburst engulfs this certain Ramble of an eerie jab in my veins. Yet, my attitude is numb, so unaffected… Perhaps this callous notion within knows I feel this hurricane's frenzy , often. I don’t know why… The marrow in my bones curdles, as usual, A time when a soul grows melancholic Knowing in the core of turmoil, I need to go away. ------------ Hurricane Contest Re-submitted 9/12/2017 Sponsor: Julie Rodeheaver
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 9/13/2017 8:36:00 PM
Beautiful, Nette, congratulations on your win hugs Eve
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Date: 9/12/2017 9:21:00 AM
Congrats nette!
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Date: 9/12/2017 9:00:00 AM
Very descriptive--Congrats, Nette! Janice
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Date: 7/15/2016 11:31:00 AM
Nette, so wonderfully written lady, you hold a true gift, as always :)congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo
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Date: 5/18/2016 7:14:00 AM
Congrats Nette, for your WIN in the contest!! ;-)
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Date: 5/17/2016 3:30:00 PM
I loved your entry Nette. Emotions run deep in your metaphor. It was excellent! I am sure glad I didn't have to judge this contest from the beautiful entries I have been reading, I would have had too much difficulty choosing top winners. Kelly did great, but I would have been tempted to give a lot more first places. Congratulations on your well deserved win Nette! #7. ; )
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Date: 5/17/2016 5:23:00 AM
Congrats on your beautiful win, Nette! Great metaphors and your last three lines are akin to my heart- it comes when one has endured many rougher storms.
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Date: 5/15/2016 10:54:00 PM
Congratulations Nette on the placement of the contest
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Date: 5/15/2016 9:47:00 PM
I really enjoyed the mysterious nature of your poem as well as it's stirring imagery... Nicely done, Nette. Congrats on a win!
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Date: 4/21/2016 7:02:00 PM
Hi Nette, nice flowing poem my dear, just make sure you don't hang your washing out LoL. Good luck in Kelly's contest, def. a 7 for this one, take care........Vera
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Date: 4/20/2016 9:31:00 PM
Loved this, I felt this on more than one level, and it did make me think of Houston! :)
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Date: 4/19/2016 7:07:00 AM
This captures the feel with ominous tones. Good luck in the contest Nette!
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Date: 4/18/2016 10:20:00 PM
Dear Nette What a powerful piece I give you a well deserved seven for this stormy masterpiece, that you've done simply beautifully my poetic artistic friend, loved it completely, what wondeful natural imagery you've put forth here, just wonderfully expressed, great power to the written words ink, take care and thanks for your visit to my site as well, I appreciate your lovely comments, take care, cheri d.
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Date: 4/18/2016 8:00:00 PM
A furious storm you show nette filled with powerful imagery...well done
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Date: 4/18/2016 2:57:00 PM
- A familiar storm, wonderful described Nette :) - I wish you good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/18/2016 2:47:00 PM
Exceptional poem! The storm , though tempestuous can be liberating. What talent you display with consistency!
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Date: 4/18/2016 1:41:00 PM
Wonderful piece Nette, painted with such vivid color and feel...
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