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As Fair As Whitest Swan

Midst gentle early summer day's sunshine I saw her in the swelling crowd anon Her elegant demeanor so refined Framed skin so soft, as fair as whitest swan Of royal blood she was most certainly No doubt a scion of the King and Queen I knew that she was far too good for me And yet I seized the opportunity I signaled to her that she should draw near My heart, on fire, was pounding like a drum It seemed at first she did not want to hear But then I realized that she would come She weaved her way through throngs that lovely day To brush my cheek ~ I fainted dead away

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 6/22/2020 6:52:00 PM
Delicate - a gorgeous love story.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/22/2020 7:57:00 PM
Thank you, my friend! :) gw
Date: 6/22/2020 2:06:00 PM
Wow, true Love at last but only for a moment...
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/22/2020 7:56:00 PM
Well, gotta make every moment count, I guess. Smiles, gw
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/22/2020 7:56:00 PM
Well, gotta make every moment count, I guess. Smiles, gw
Date: 6/22/2020 12:46:00 PM
Is this a love lost or did you succeed. Well written sonnet Gershon Tom
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/22/2020 7:55:00 PM
No, no, no. Not me... Rather, my twin brother, Abercrombie Fofoofnik (Wolf)! :) gw
Date: 6/22/2020 5:30:00 AM
A lovely sonnet. A bit too much for her admirer ;)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/22/2020 7:55:00 PM
Yeah, he wilted like Michael Bloomberg's bid for the Presidency! lol. Thanks, Kim.
Date: 6/22/2020 12:57:00 AM
lol..I fainted dead.. Oh no, you lost your good chance.. lol..Sweet lovely sonnet..
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/22/2020 7:53:00 PM
Another day, another fainting episode. Easy come, easy go. C'est la vie! Pierre, the 'what-me-worry' Romantic

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