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As Dawn Softly Stirs

As dawn softly stirs, wistful musings touch my mind. A balmy morning mist is silently drifting on the air. It's as though I've left the wretched world behind. All I'm able to hear are songbirds singing with flair. Gratefully, I offer thanks in an early morning prayer. At the cusp of daylight, when my world is aligned, there's an aura of peace of which I become aware, as dawn softly stirs, wistful musings touch my mind. In these meditative moments I am never inclined to dwell upon anxieties and burdens that I bear. No threat of harm bothers me, even when I find a balmy morning mist is silently drifting on the air. In these tranquil interludes, I perceive no despair. I'm free from life's fetters without feeling confined. I don't dwell on traps or those who set the snare. It's as though I've left the wretched world behind. I'm cognizant of the dilemmas that thwart mankind, hardships and wars. From the fate of these, beware. There's slandering of innocent ones, those maligned. All I'm able to hear are songbirds singing with flair. We must not allow ourselves to be labeled or defined as a conflicted society when we should show we care. To living with anarchy, we must not become resigned. Let's reflect on a better way of life that we can share, as dawn softly stirs. June 7, 2022 A Rondeau Redouble Contest Sponsor: Milt Hankins

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Date: 7/7/2022 11:32:00 AM
I love the thought of your world being aligned as you wake in the mists of an exquisite early morning. I think this is a prayer for all of us to become "aligned." Congratulations on your win. Blessings of continued alignment!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 7/7/2022 11:52:00 AM
It's my favorite time of day. I usually wake long before sunrise and enjoy the quiet, waiting for the songbirds to sing to me. Thanks for you lovely review, Sam.
Date: 7/7/2022 8:26:00 AM
Well done! Congratulations ons 2nd place trophy!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 7/7/2022 11:51:00 AM
Thanks ever so much for your congrats, Kim.
Date: 7/6/2022 3:25:00 PM
Enjoyed your skillfully written rondeau Jenna, congrats on your 2nd place win,
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Jenna Logan
Date: 7/7/2022 11:51:00 AM
Thank you so very much for your kind comments, Rose.
Date: 7/5/2022 11:04:00 PM
Lovely poem with beautiful musings on how to greet a new day in fresh hope and zeal shutting our eyes and ears to all disparaging and denigrating talks and attitudes. Congratulations on your well deserved win, Jenna !
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Jenna Logan
Date: 7/6/2022 4:24:00 AM
I very much appreciate your kind comments, Valsa.
Date: 7/5/2022 9:34:00 AM
Marvelous Jenna. You make this difficult form flow! Congratulations! Linda
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Jenna Logan
Date: 7/5/2022 2:49:00 PM
Thanks so very much, Linda.
Date: 7/5/2022 7:37:00 AM
A beautiful and deserving piece, Jenna. Congratulations on your podium finish in my contest. This form is not easy to navigate, but you have done so exceptionally well.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 7/5/2022 2:49:00 PM
Milt, I'm very happy to have placed in your contest and appreciate the effort you put forth to sponsor your challenging contests.
Date: 6/8/2022 5:47:00 AM
Jenna, this is an exquisite piece! I also find the precipice of dawn to be the most tranquil and the most fertile time of thought! I just love this one xxoo
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Jenna Logan
Date: 6/8/2022 8:44:00 AM
I'm so pleased by your sincere comments, Mike. It's such a peaceful time that passes much too quickly. There are times when I all hear are the birds, hoping sunlight waits for them to finish their song. Thank you so much!
Date: 6/7/2022 8:01:00 PM
Confine into harsh complexities, that is the world for you. There are no doubt a saving grace in wistful musing. Nicely done Jenna.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 6/8/2022 8:42:00 AM
Hello, Weston, and thank you very much for reading and leaving your thoughts.
Date: 6/7/2022 7:42:00 PM
To living with anarchy, we must not become resigned. My very favorite line. Excellent write. Ann
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Jenna Logan
Date: 6/8/2022 8:42:00 AM
Thanks, Ann. I love it when a poet lets me know something in particular that they liked.
Date: 6/7/2022 2:25:00 PM
I love that time of day before the sun rises, it's so peaceful apart from the early morning sounds of the songbirds and your mind reflects on the world about you without interruption. Brilliant write Jenna and good luck. Tom
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Jenna Logan
Date: 6/7/2022 5:33:00 PM
Hi Tom, Thanks for taking the time to read and comment on this one. It's my favorite time of day, too.

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