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As Dawn Breaks

blue chill interrupts
a passionate interlude,
with essence of dawn.

Copyright © 2010 By Caryl S. Muzzey

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John Freeman

Date: 3/8/2010 7:20:00 AM

Congratulations Caryl with this success. Agape, Moses

James Fraser

Date: 2/28/2010 4:52:00 AM

Deserved placing for this fine Haiku >> James

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 2/23/2010 1:21:00 PM

You have a confidence in this form that I could never hope to emulate. Regardss, Gerard. Thanks as always.

Susan Palli

Date: 2/23/2010 3:33:00 AM

Can feel the chill!

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 2/22/2010 1:42:00 PM

A beautiful Haiku, Caryl. Thank you for the kind comments. .....Jimmy

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 2/20/2010 10:52:00 PM

Beautiful haiku, dear Caryl. Congratulations! Love, Iolanda

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/20/2010 8:08:00 PM

Congrats Caryl on your winning poem in Raul's recent contest.. a wonderful Haiku and a well deserved win.. luv.. Linda-Marie .. enjoy!

Margaret Foster

Date: 2/20/2010 5:44:00 PM

Well done Caryl, A lovely haiku....Margaret

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/20/2010 5:24:00 PM

Caryl, you did a great job. Congrats on your HM. It's amazing how we all saw the picture and described it a little differently!!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/20/2010 2:14:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Raul Moreno's (Awaiting Dawn Contest) Caryl. Love, Carol

Raul Moreno

Date: 2/20/2010 1:15:00 PM

Caryl, Congrats on your placement in my contest...Raul

Cecil Hickman

Date: 2/20/2010 12:25:00 PM

a passionate Haiku,,good luck in the contest,and Thank you for reading and commenting upon mine,,Blesings..Cecil

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 2/20/2010 5:10:00 AM

Reading your poetry this morning, Caryl, has been a wonderful way to start my day. Thank you for sharing your words. And thank you for your comments on my poetry as well. Have a super Day! Lovingly, Dane Ann