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As Dawn Breaks

blue chill interrupts
a passionate interlude,
with essence of dawn.

Copyright © 2010 By Caryl S. Muzzey

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John Freeman

March 8, 2010 at 7:20 AM

Congratulations Caryl with this success. Agape, Moses

James Fraser

February 28, 2010 at 4:52 AM

Deserved placing for this fine Haiku >> James

Gerard Keogh Jr.

February 23, 2010 at 1:21 PM

You have a confidence in this form that I could never hope to emulate. Regardss, Gerard. Thanks as always.

Susan Palli

February 23, 2010 at 3:33 AM

Can feel the chill!

Jimmy Anderson

February 22, 2010 at 1:42 PM

A beautiful Haiku, Caryl. Thank you for the kind comments. .....Jimmy

Iolanda Scripca

February 20, 2010 at 10:52 PM

Beautiful haiku, dear Caryl. Congratulations! Love, Iolanda

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 20, 2010 at 8:08 PM

Congrats Caryl on your winning poem in Raul's recent contest.. a wonderful Haiku and a well deserved win.. luv.. Linda-Marie .. enjoy!

Margaret Foster

February 20, 2010 at 5:44 PM

Well done Caryl, A lovely haiku....Margaret

Andrea Dietrich

February 20, 2010 at 5:24 PM

Caryl, you did a great job. Congrats on your HM. It's amazing how we all saw the picture and described it a little differently!!

Carol Sunshine Brown

February 20, 2010 at 2:14 PM

Congratulations on your win in Raul Moreno's (Awaiting Dawn Contest) Caryl. Love, Carol

Raul Moreno

February 20, 2010 at 1:15 PM

Caryl, Congrats on your placement in my contest...Raul

Cecil Hickman

February 20, 2010 at 12:25 PM

a passionate Haiku,,good luck in the contest,and Thank you for reading and commenting upon mine,,Blesings..Cecil

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

February 20, 2010 at 5:10 AM

Reading your poetry this morning, Caryl, has been a wonderful way to start my day. Thank you for sharing your words. And thank you for your comments on my poetry as well. Have a super Day! Lovingly, Dane Ann