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As Comets Foray

Oh, what powerful lights on a sable sea Sugar crystals sprinkled on all ebony Back to the ground, eyes up to sky Plant me like this, the very day I die In a glass coffin on the world, display My eyes to the stars, as comets foray I pray to heaven if this be how my soul is condemned In looking up, my words on angels garments hemmed

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Date: 4/12/2023 10:08:00 PM
This sounds a beautiful wish... to lie in a glass coffin with eyes set on the stars in the firmament as comets foray. A beautiful writing dear A.S
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Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 4/13/2023 3:21:00 AM
Thank you very much! It was born of a love for astrology. Warmly A.S.
Date: 4/6/2023 9:47:00 AM
Beautiful and original, A.S.! :)
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Date: 4/6/2023 5:05:00 PM
Thank you very much Paige! Warmly A.S.
Date: 4/6/2023 8:55:00 AM
This is really nice, AS. I like this one:)
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Date: 4/6/2023 5:05:00 PM
Thank you very much DT found a glimmer of Happiness when I wrote this one. Who am I kidding I'm always happy LOL! A.S.
Date: 4/6/2023 2:53:00 AM
- Sounds beautiful, A.S. - Happy Easter :) - hugs
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Date: 4/6/2023 5:29:00 AM
Thank you Sun :) the Stars are the eyes of the night! Happy Easter A.S.
Date: 4/5/2023 8:42:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful….your words captured my heart U.S…..Debx
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Date: 4/6/2023 5:28:00 AM
:) Thanks Deb was doing a bit of star gazing yesterday. I am very pleased that you like it!! Best Wishes A.S.

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