Anonomus Scorpio Poet Free verse

As Comets Foray

Oh, what powerful lights on a sable sea
Sugar crystals sprinkled on all ebony
Back to the ground, eyes up to sky
Plant me like this, the very day I die
In a glass coffin on the world, display
My eyes to the stars, as comets foray
I pray to heaven if this be how my soul is condemned
In looking up, my words on angels garments hemmed

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Valsa George April 12, 2023 at 10:08 PM This sounds a beautiful wish... to lie in a glass coffin with eyes set on the stars in the firmament as comets foray. A beautiful writing dear A.S Anonomus Scorpio April 13, 2023 at 3:21 AM Thank you very much! It was born of a love for astrology. Warmly A.S.

Paige Hind April 6, 2023 at 9:47 AM Beautiful and original, A.S.! :) Anonomus Scorpio April 6, 2023 at 5:05 PM Thank you very much Paige! Warmly A.S.

Daniel Turner April 6, 2023 at 8:55 AM This is really nice, AS. I like this one:) Anonomus Scorpio April 6, 2023 at 5:05 PM Thank you very much DT found a glimmer of Happiness when I wrote this one. Who am I kidding I'm always happy LOL! A.S.

Anne-Lise Andresen April 6, 2023 at 2:53 AM - Sounds beautiful, A.S. - Happy Easter :) - hugs Anonomus Scorpio April 6, 2023 at 5:29 AM Thank you Sun :) the Stars are the eyes of the night! Happy Easter A.S.

Deb M April 5, 2023 at 8:42 PM Absolutely beautiful….your words captured my heart U.S…..Debx Anonomus Scorpio April 6, 2023 at 5:28 AM :) Thanks Deb was doing a bit of star gazing yesterday. I am very pleased that you like it!! Best Wishes A.S.