As Autumn's Breeze

Pleasant cool feet of
The autumn breeze caressing
Larks for the last time 
For nostrils are already
Itching to sneeze out moisture

Earth in Thimpu now
Looks back and pauses a while
Why good bye so soon
But the unrelenting sun
Moves off inviting Jack Frost

On the window pane
Snowflakes hug evening gross beak
Snow crystals look on
Adorning the bare tree branch
Snow skating park underneath 

Lovely small snow balls
Silver gossamer on trees                         
Snow sleet in the rain
Blizzard of dislike waiting
Fond suns are always fragile
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31/8/2016
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Breese Avatar
September 7, 2016 at 8:48 PM
Very, very nice poem. I love autumn also :)
Gupta Avatar
September 8, 2016 at 5:19 AM
Thank you ...
Warrior Avatar
August 31, 2016 at 7:53 PM
A tease from an autumn breeze...very well written my friend...I can feel a chill already lol...god bless...^WW^
Gupta Avatar
August 31, 2016 at 11:11 PM
Thank you ...
Andresen Avatar
August 31, 2016 at 1:12 PM
- It is seldom snow in Norway in the autumn, often rain and wind - A lovely image in your poems, Probir - (do you have snow in India?) - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gupta Avatar
August 31, 2016 at 11:18 PM
we do have snow in winter in India in places like Kashmir, Simla, Darjeeling etc. , but not where I live, ... in the poem, however, the place referred to is Thimpu, which is in Bhutan ... thank you for reading my poem and expressing curiosity ....
DiMino Avatar
August 31, 2016 at 12:27 PM
Great imagery! Nature is a wonder.
Gupta Avatar
August 31, 2016 at 11:19 PM
Thank you ...
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