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As Autumn's Breeze

Autumn's breeze picked up the delicate snow flakes She tossed them until they turned to ice crystals She recently put away her autumn colors Now stirred Jack Frost into a frenzy So upset he asked North wind to blow in with a blizzard North wind obliged and skated in with a smooth glide Showing Autumn breeze that her strength was waning She twirled away giving North wind and Jack Frost a cold shoulder. 29/08/16

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/5/2016 9:44:00 PM

by the way, sweetie. I wish I could check out your other recent poem but hubbie got up from a long nap and I have to get off here RIGHT now. haha. Maybe I will try to post a poem on my way off. Luv ya, and thanks for the bday wishes!!

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 9/8/2016 11:22:00 AM

Take care I appreciate your time in commenting as know how busy you always are. Luv u 2. phyl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/5/2016 9:43:00 PM

wow, your entry was really good. I love the personification. I see no congrats and I think it was judged? Geeez.

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 9/8/2016 11:21:00 AM

Yes it was judged but hey I have not done many contests of late. Not even writing--muse is on a holiday I think. love phyl

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/1/2016 8:12:00 PM

This was fun to read Phyl and I loved your wity ending! A great entry for the contest! 7 ; )

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 9/8/2016 11:34:00 AM

Me too, watching my granddaughter almost every day. I get next to nothing done when she is here, but I don't care. We have fun. Cheers : )

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 9/8/2016 11:19:00 AM

Thanks for you comment Connie. Hope all is well with you. Busy babysitting summer for me. love phyl

Jan Allison

Date: 9/1/2016 3:33:00 PM

Such wonderful personification Phyllis I see our little Island is getting the beautiful autumnal colours which I love:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 9/1/2016 5:24:00 PM

Thanks Jan for your comment and yes fall is on it's way. A very colorful time of year but also sad as winter is my least favorite time of year. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/29/2016 1:37:00 PM

- Summer is over and autumn breeze breathing down our necks - A lovely poem, Phyllis :) - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 9/1/2016 3:26:00 PM

Yes the leaves are turning yellow and starting to fall so another season is upon us. thanks. love phyl