As Autumn Ends

Late autumn glides  with buoyant ease
Where songbirds  twit  a mellow note;
A hymn for cycle’s last reprise
That graces  rippled leaves afloat:
November  whorls  its amber  lace
Endowing quiet as blooms  cloak
The lanes     the fields… in night’s embrace
When trails of garlands limp evoke
Crisp season’s  end… nipped  trees  droop low
As  moonshine blesses  each day’s  reign,
Immersed  in  gray ...where all   things flow
While comfort soothes my breath,   my gain.

I shall but hold  Fall’s  velvet wrap
Before  the jaws of  frost entrap.


Super Sonnet Premium Contest For John Hamilton 
Re-post: 12/14/2018
Originally Written 7/23/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 12/2/2018 3:26:00 PM
Nice one Nette bringing season close with an autumnal piece, fine write!
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Date: 8/9/2018 7:19:00 AM
Dear Nette, Autumn is well depicted in your poetry. Very brilliant write. 7 out of 7.......hugs//Manmath
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Date: 7/31/2018 10:56:00 AM
I enjoyed this. Thanks
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Date: 7/30/2018 4:31:00 PM
Hello Dear Nette, Very Beautifully Done!! Was a marvelous combination of words and images. A Superb Sonnet for sure!! Best Wishes, Gary
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Date: 7/28/2018 5:59:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Well done!
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Date: 7/28/2018 12:51:00 AM
I just fell in love with this poem and now I don't know what to do with myself. I'll just take a 'love pause', breathe it in and out so my spirit and I may immerse-share this 'now.' I leave you with Wow. CayCay
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Date: 7/27/2018 3:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your awesome win,Nette . I enjoyed reading this well written sonnet. Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/27/2018 11:44:00 AM
Very lovely sonnet Nette. Congratulations on your win! : )
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Date: 7/26/2018 8:17:00 AM
This is in every way a top class and beautifully crafted sonnet my good friend.. A fav.. an awesome view of Nature..
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Date: 7/25/2018 4:23:00 PM
Lovely imagery Nette..
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Date: 7/25/2018 1:42:00 PM
I want to wrap your words around me. You paint such beautiful images. The feel of Autumn, the colors that surround. Simply breathtaking indeed. ~ Brandy
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Date: 7/23/2018 9:44:00 PM
Delicate beauty graces every line and graceful rhythm dances beautifully with your words, Nette. Breathtaking! Best wishes for a win! ~Susan
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Date: 7/23/2018 7:21:00 PM
your pen dazzles dear poet in its soft realms of imagination and beauty
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Date: 7/23/2018 7:05:00 PM
I've been reading Shakespeare's sonnets and reading this was like Id missed one. Brilliant write Nette, good luck. Tom
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Date: 7/23/2018 5:36:00 PM
You bring me to your peaceful garden one fine word after another, thank you for sharing this, it is a fine sonnet indeed
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Date: 7/23/2018 4:20:00 PM
This is so beautiful nette, An enchanting sonnet, written with such elegance.
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Date: 7/23/2018 4:09:00 PM
Excellent poem--beautiful imagery..well written, as always..best for a win, nette.
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Date: 7/23/2018 1:26:00 PM
Beautiful sonnet Nette..enjoyes
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Date: 7/23/2018 12:41:00 PM
This must be your favorite season...you described its departure with grace...All the best nette...
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Date: 7/23/2018 11:48:00 AM
WoW! Such an electric ending, Nette. One quintessential hallmark of a great poem. I LOVE this sonnet. An instant fave for sure. Love and joy always.
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Date: 7/23/2018 11:15:00 AM
Beautiful Nette! So nice to read today :)
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Date: 7/23/2018 11:09:00 AM
Elegant sonnet, Nette...line 5 captures sweet essence!
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