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As Autumn Delays-A Quietus

As Autumn delays, I await Winter's crystal snowflakes With delight, I anticipate Skating on frozen lakes Golden leaves turning red Bare tree limbs I will dread But I will look ahead To chillier days As Autumn delays

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Joanna Daniel

Date: 12/6/2021 6:19:00 AM

Amazing quietus, Lin:) enjoyed:)

Lin Lane
Date: 12/6/2021 8:04:00 AM

Thanks so much, Jo.

Mark Koplin

Date: 12/5/2021 8:48:00 AM

Awesome ink my friend! Grab your shovel and head north.

Lin Lane
Date: 12/6/2021 8:04:00 AM

HA...Mark, I'm afraid my days of shoveling snow ended when I left Colorado and moved back home where it's 72 degrees at the moment.

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 12/4/2021 9:21:00 PM

Superb Quietus Lin! This form comes with a warning; it’s addictive! Enjoy!

Lin Lane
Date: 12/6/2021 8:03:00 AM

Thanks for your help and encouragement, Seeker. Yes! It is addictive!

Bill Baker

Date: 12/4/2021 9:50:00 AM

Well written seasonal poem with great rhyming, Lin Glad your still sharing! Bill

Lin Lane
Date: 12/6/2021 8:02:00 AM

Thank you very much, Bill. I think I finally got the hang of the form.