As Another July Day Dawns

As Another July Day Dawns

Stippling . . .
The leaves of the trees
S p a t t e r i n g   …Their
   Silhouettes 
       filling my window  
(Barely to be seen while stll so early)
The dark dots …
     of the remains
Of the night’s 
Weeping
      leaving hymn spreading  — 
          with its soft graphite  gray
          blanket background
Rippling
 (as if caught in some 
Lasting
    d r e a m
Unwilling to reach its 
        e n d i n g
…Leaving
       and so to be sliding  aside
		         for this day’s gracing 
Dawn
      sun to rise
~ coaxed by the fading background grays
Now
    blushing 
    into neon light gray/white
    flakes
    of dawn spattering like a Christmas in
July snow with
This 
          r i s i n g
Tickling
          my poet’s  tongue…




(c) sally young eslinger 7/2024
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024


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Date: 7/14/2024 12:39:00 PM
Divine poetry! Very beautiful -- July one of our hibernation months here in Phoenix. Blessings my friend. Lovely read.
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Date: 7/13/2024 11:57:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful July write. Just another July dawn until August comes around. Hope you are OK... Have a blessed day/weekend writing away................
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Date: 7/13/2024 10:13:00 AM
This is so vivid, Sally, I can see the dawn spreading across the windows and grass, love the poignant line about the dream unwilling to reach its ending, sometimes I wake up wishing my dream had lasted just a few more minutes, so glad you shared this lovely gem with us~
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Date: 7/13/2024 9:12:00 AM
The tree comes alive for me in this poem.
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Date: 7/13/2024 6:12:00 AM
This is beautiful! I love the way it flows so freely and how youv arranged your words! Creative and very artistic, the last line stood out the most for me. Dear sally, i hope you are doing well and its always a pleasure reading your work, sending you light
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Date: 7/12/2024 10:48:00 PM
beautiful images , sonorities and poetry, very enjoyable poem tahnks poet
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