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Artist Within

Artist wannabe

I’d love to look the part
Feel and act the pro
Feel it deep within

Imbued with inspiration
Exploding with creativity
Living the life of a hermit

Ploughing through it
Or dancing through it
Not bound by rules or confines

One day I know
I’ll shed this heavy cloak
And live the way I’ve dreamt

Abandon all possessions
Become the butterfly
I was always meant to be

Freed from shackles
Just create create create        



Published in my 24-page photo/anthology book ~TO BE YOUNG AGAIN~ 2023

AP: Honorable Mention 2020

Submitted on December 31, 2018 for contest MY LOUDEST FEELINGS sponsored by CAREN KRUTSINGER  -  RANKED 2ND
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Duet Avatar
January 7, 2019 at 5:20 PM
Hi "Butterfly"! Congrats on your placement in the contest with this "creative" poem. Carole :D
Gauthier Avatar
January 7, 2019 at 6:10 PM
Thank you so much, Carole, for your much appreciated visit and comment.
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 5, 2019 at 10:00 PM
Congratulations on your second placement Line! I could relate really well to your words of how creativity calls. : ) xxoo
Gauthier Avatar
January 6, 2019 at 6:51 AM
Thank you so much, Connie.
Canerdy Avatar
January 5, 2019 at 5:22 PM
CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win! Janice
Gauthier Avatar
January 5, 2019 at 5:44 PM
Thanks, Janice, for your much appreciated visit and comment.
Roper Avatar
January 5, 2019 at 10:12 AM
Congratulations on your win, my dear.. Hugs Eve ~`*
Gauthier Avatar
January 5, 2019 at 11:41 AM
Thank you so much, Eve.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 5, 2019 at 8:44 AM
Yes, even look the part. Now you might laugh but long before I began writing seriously I’d picture myself in a billowy blouse next to a window opening to the ocean...a poet...lol! Congrats, Line!
Gauthier Avatar
January 5, 2019 at 9:09 AM
Love the visual, Kim. Yes, that is the look of a poet. Thanks for your most appreciated visit and comment.
Kiser Avatar
December 15, 2018 at 7:05 PM
Yeeesssssssss! Just create!!! Wonderfully pleasant and soothing; it puts me right into creating mode.
Gauthier Avatar
December 15, 2018 at 7:47 PM
Beautiful!! Thank you so much for your delightful visit and comment.
Mcferran Avatar
December 13, 2018 at 5:35 PM
Like CayCay, count me IN!! I LOVE this so much! This is a FAV-FAV!!! ;D
Gauthier Avatar
December 13, 2018 at 10:07 PM
The bus will be around to pick you up, Rhona. LOL
Wolf Avatar
December 12, 2018 at 10:24 PM
Careful, my friend. The grass is much, much, much greener in never-never land...Truth be told, you have found Nirvana right where you are....Great write, Line! :)
Gauthier Avatar
December 13, 2018 at 10:08 PM
LOL We'll be careful. Thanks, Gershon.
Mcguire Avatar
December 12, 2018 at 9:15 PM
I think you have achieved a lot of this in your writing talent. the curse is we have to eat
Gauthier Avatar
December 12, 2018 at 9:17 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Timothy. True, if I had lots of money I could buy an image or a makeover.
Godwin Avatar
December 12, 2018 at 12:37 PM
Can I go with you? Where does free land exist these days, where we could live as artist hippies? I'm IN. Loved this, related to it and completely inhaled it. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Gauthier Avatar
December 12, 2018 at 4:14 PM
Thanks for your delightful visit, CayCay. Let's rent a minibus and see who else wants to come.
May Avatar
December 12, 2018 at 9:27 AM
Finding freedom in creativity..Nicely expressed Line..
Gauthier Avatar
December 12, 2018 at 4:14 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Joseph.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 12, 2018 at 5:32 AM
A lovely thought, dear Poet,
Gauthier Avatar
December 12, 2018 at 4:15 PM
Thanks, Kim, for your much appreciated visit and comment.
La France Avatar
December 12, 2018 at 5:20 AM
Line, I love this poem with so many amazing lines, it is very deep and emotional too, you are a very creative person and one day I know you will fly free ~
Gauthier Avatar
December 12, 2018 at 4:15 PM
LOL Thanks, Constance. Most appreciated.
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