Art of Falling

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A Valentine's Day Treat!

Art of falling atop roses,
Bedroom scented with vanilla...
Come Sweetheart! That’s for later,
Dear! Romance me with terms of
Endearment, sudden
Fear of falling in love all over again.
Gaiety of candlelight...I’m your sprite,
“Hello, over here…,” 
I wiggle my fingers coquettishly.
Just you wait for dessert..wink.
Keep your hazels on me,
Love. I don’t
Mind our modest
Nest,
Our quiet
Place. Re- -
Quest a dance, my love,
Really
Slow.
Take me now
Under the stars.
Vanish with me to
Wild places… e- -
Xotic beaches. Tantalize
Your sprite with 
Zabaglione* and berries.

2/14/2020
Caren Krutsinger’s ABECEDARIAN Poetry Contest

*pronounced za-bull-yo-nee

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 2/17/2020 11:41:00 AM
Wow. So romantic and sensual, should do well in the contest, Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/17/2020 4:51:00 PM
Thank you, Michelle!
Date: 2/17/2020 8:43:00 AM
One of the most enjoyable ABC poems I have ever read. Bravo.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/17/2020 4:51:00 PM
Thank you so much! <3
Date: 2/15/2020 10:30:00 AM
Much enjoyed this image rich romp. Good poetry!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/15/2020 10:34:00 AM
Thanks, Eric! :)
Date: 2/15/2020 6:58:00 AM
I see you did this a bit different to others.. nice choice for X and Z... this is really romantic...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/15/2020 7:32:00 AM
Thank you, Silent!
Date: 2/14/2020 7:41:00 PM
wow... what a sensual verse, perfect for Valentine's day and brilliantly penned in this form... Happy Valentine's day to you! hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/14/2020 9:03:00 PM
Thank you, Sandra! Happy Valentine’s Day!
Date: 2/14/2020 4:47:00 PM
WoW!Kim, This is a good entry for the contest.I found the form to be very challenging. You nailed it! It was so romantic and sensual. It was a great poem to read on Valentine’s Day! I wish you the best of luck in the contest.Happy Valentines Day. Have a wonderful weekend:-) Alexis
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/14/2020 9:02:00 PM
Thank you, Alexis! Happy Valentine’s Day!
Date: 2/14/2020 3:51:00 PM
Beautifully sensual and alluring my friend. Happy Valentine's Day Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/14/2020 9:02:00 PM
Thank you, Chris! Happy Valentine’s Day!
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