Ars Poetica (L'Nass Shango: the Conversation Continued).

Freedom is an alter ego like a mask
Behind which censor has no eyes, and balm its blood applies.
Poetry is my freedom when wings cannot fly
The pain of the arrow in my solitary eye ...
You wrote me as a poem, I write you back so I
Can write a poem that invite your poem to tea.

I sometimes see me in the mirror of words
And cannot recognize who I am
How many points of light forms my face alone
Making a fable on the faulty foundation of sense
Are these suppose to be revelations
For I have longings carved like a Grecian Urn
The stillness of that eternity frightens me
Like is a simily ... a wave of action towards a full intent
So many symbols, and everyone alienating
Why can't we tell truth in Images
Like eggs. A cycle from essence to existence
And through all the purposes of each motion
Phases of a common solution?

Mirrors are not reservoirs, you know, they preserve nothing
Let culture preserve what it will
My art shall do the selecting of what the will must be
For I must preserve truly if only preserve me
And do not fear now, some conflict between you and I
That my preservation can be your destruction is such a lie
Broken mirrors make distinctions 
A thousand shards point their image at a single eye
But feel, when you cannot see
Feel the universal solution ... for we are only solutes
In the solvents of our meaning
You and I the tangents of a simple circle converging

I love the breaking of isolation
The conversation dissolving us again
Into a common brotherhood, beyond the blundering pain
Our life is fragment of everything now
Politics, economics, physics, dreams and faith
Word is but a mirror before us, the senses little gates
The mirrored shadow has only one moral imperative here
To haunts us till we make it right
I exorcised the ghost that bind us up with fear
And long to break the mirror too
And feel my wings flying in the perfect nothingness. 

Wait for me, brother. I am coming too
Swinging on a beam of star, sipping on love's dew.
Measured in unmeasured meter
Defying our partition into syllables of spoon
Rhyming to mate a synonym exactly to the moon
Everything in this solution is never abstraction
Never more a ritual of dump imperial traditions
I shall break the mirror then, the first act of our liberation
And the water shall turn to wine.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 11/16/2010 5:14:00 AM
Joy, I love your anxiety about the mirror, perhaps I will do one on the mirror alone ... for poets too through their feelings investigate, and you touched on something that Alice in Wonderland did not see. Thanks, and love
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Date: 11/15/2010 5:29:00 PM
deep write David, just stopping by to read a couple of your writes, have a good night,...P.D.
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Date: 11/15/2010 2:25:00 PM
David, I must agree with Sena's reading of this. Seems I pushed your button ... and had excellence in that push. Immortal.
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Date: 11/15/2010 9:15:00 AM
Wow! This was deep and very moving! I love the last sentence, "I shall break the mirror then, the first act of our liberation And the water shall turn to wine." Thanks for sharing this excellent work!
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