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Arrhythmic Attachment


when Medusa feathers 
of midnight fractals
dip in my soul 
   and smear 
soft hemlock stardust 
across the
   celestial ceiling ~
smothered with spinel 
   my shadow seethes 
in the scent 
   of flaming jasmines ~
as I  slip  
          a n d  trip ~    
drunk upon opium,
cruising in 
cursed ventricles,
and pleading 
for the release 
of my muse ~
perfumed with 
pensive passion,
that burns in the 
chamomile craters, 
courageous 
yet clawed
by the cowardice
of your corvid 
cruelties …

this heart is a hostage 
held in the heat 
of hypocrisy ~
hypnotised to the hues 
of your heather hush,
 tamed to obey 
the time-travelling tunes
of the sun and the moon,
who impersonate 
the aura of aurelia 
yet, breathe the blush
of bitter-silk butterflies ~
illuminated within 
the ivory incandescence 
of my inkless innocence …
but, still I am immune 
to your illusions ,
as I am nevermore ~
an oasis-rose ash
plucked from the 
desert of oblivion,
desperate to deem 
this desire my own,
before I stretch 
these hands of hurt 
and block 
     the periwinkle
          pulsations ~
flowing 
in the arteries of 
     arrhythmic
           attachment …
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Hind Avatar
August 11, 2026 at 10:36 PM
this is beautiful!! "in the arteries of arrhythmic attachment …"
George Avatar
August 7, 2026 at 10:01 PM
With feelings of hurt, betrayal and cruelty, you are not willing to surrender or lose spirit, but courageously come up invigorating your muse. "but, still I am immune to your illusions , as I am nevermore ~ an oasis-rose ash plucked from the desert of oblivion,"- This firm resolve will guard you time and again. Your Alliterative poems with splendid metaphors always stand out. 👏How I in vain I try to plunge into their depths!🥹
Kerr Avatar
August 7, 2026 at 12:14 AM
A most impressive display of your limitless talent, Hiya. I was captivated by its majestic flow and in addition it never strayed from its essential topic. Images imaginative and alluring. I especially appreciate “ivory incandescence of my inkless innocence,” and “breathe the blush of bitter-silk butterflies” in addition to “hypnotised to the hues.”❤️🔥 Enthralling. Howard
Dietrich Avatar
August 4, 2026 at 11:33 PM
A free verse wowser. You really know how to make your lines come alive with poetic devices of alliteration and metaphor 🌸
Buhagiar Avatar
August 3, 2026 at 11:13 PM
Your poem is very creative and makes one read it to enjoy your metaphors.
Smith  Avatar
August 3, 2026 at 8:08 PM
Your use of metaphor within this amazing piece deepens its message. 🌹💕💋💘💔🫂
Goldsmith Avatar
August 3, 2026 at 12:56 PM
What a creative write you have here. Love It...  Great Picture. "Good Luck" if for a contest... Have a fun day writing away..........
Kendrick Avatar
August 3, 2026 at 12:41 PM
Bless that person's heart that has to deal with arrhythmic arteries and hemlock star dust. A lot to dread and handle in these times in which we live. Creative lines. Way to go. 👏✍️Sara K.
Kauffman Avatar
August 3, 2026 at 11:48 AM
Dear Hiya, each line spins in the ambivalence of unfulfilled love, desire and passion. There is a deep sense of grieving that comes through your alliteration and symbolism. If this is for a contest, best wishes. Sending you blessings of consolation!
Cunningham Avatar
August 3, 2026 at 10:25 AM
Stunning imagery and your use of metaphors, I sense betrayal and pain in your verse Hiya. The heart can indeed be a hostage in a relationship. Tom🌹
Empress Avatar
August 3, 2026 at 8:47 AM
"the ivory incandescence of my inkless innocence " your innocence will always be inky! Hahah whatever that means! Gosh dont mind me hun! This definitely is a fave for me! I absolutely love this poem! Cus i felt the energy! Sigh! Sometimes life can be testing us! Stay resilient, stay inspired always 💫🌙🧜‍♀️ 🧚 🌙 💫 💃
Empress Avatar
August 3, 2026 at 8:45 AM
Awwn my sweet soulful star! I see and feel resilience flow throughout your well woven words here! Youv expressed so well! And it genuinely feels like a very cathartic poem! And I need this energy right now as I am struggling with endo pain too! Ugh! How clever is your word pairing! And as I read this i think to my self! What a strong soul you are! And I admire your ability to keep it real! "arteries of arrhythmic attachmen" now well thats the daughter of doctors writing!
Poet Avatar
August 3, 2026 at 8:04 AM
This beautiful poem creates a vivid and complex tapestry of emotions by applying rich and metaphorical language to address themes of incarceration, desire, and the battle for freedom, dear Hiya. Using mythical and natural images, the poem expresses a sensation of being overwhelmed by competing emotions and external pressures, ending in a yearning for independence and self-discovery. From the first to the final line, the poem makes good use of imagery and metaphor to increase clarity and cohesiveness.👏👍🌹🌹
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