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Array of Sunrays

Luminous highlights, Broad strokes of vintage sunshine: Pastel reflections.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/13/2009 11:48:00 AM
This is beautiful...I love it! Marty
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Date: 10/13/2009 5:54:00 AM
Beautiful picture of autum, Raul! Nicely written. And thanky for your comments....Gert
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Date: 10/12/2009 9:39:00 PM
the last line reminds me of the many mornings i wake up to on my way to school.....very nice raul!!!!
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Date: 10/12/2009 12:19:00 PM
Brightly painted Haiku Raul, >> James
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Date: 10/12/2009 12:07:00 PM
Lovin the "vintage sunshine" thing
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Date: 10/12/2009 9:38:00 AM
Brilliant Haiku Raul, Oh yea, sunshine in a bottle,and away we go. your comments always welcome and appreciated. Sincerely, Moses
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Date: 10/12/2009 9:23:00 AM
Beautiful writing Raul. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/12/2009 9:21:00 AM
Gosh !! Marvellous. This is a great Haiku with vivid imagery. Ezcellent Raul. Meg.
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Date: 10/12/2009 8:06:00 AM
Brilliant, Raul! Love the reference to "vintage sunshine." Great haiku from the King! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/12/2009 7:18:00 AM
Raul this is a wonderful haiku - very vivid - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 10/12/2009 3:49:00 AM
Cleverly named , perfect Haiku from the Master .....
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Date: 10/12/2009 12:26:00 AM
i need some Sunrays Rauli need some sunshine lumining my life.. beautiful,magical Haiku-charma
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