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Array of Sunrays

Luminous highlights, Broad strokes of vintage sunshine: Pastel reflections.

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Marty Owens

Date: 10/13/2009 11:48:00 AM

This is beautiful...I love it! Marty

Gert W. Knop

Date: 10/13/2009 5:54:00 AM

Beautiful picture of autum, Raul! Nicely written. And thanky for your comments....Gert

Abe Lopez

Date: 10/12/2009 9:39:00 PM

the last line reminds me of the many mornings i wake up to on my way to school.....very nice raul!!!!

James Fraser

Date: 10/12/2009 12:19:00 PM

Brightly painted Haiku Raul, >> James

Savannah Rose Harper

Date: 10/12/2009 12:07:00 PM

Lovin the "vintage sunshine" thing

John Freeman

Date: 10/12/2009 9:38:00 AM

Brilliant Haiku Raul, Oh yea, sunshine in a bottle,and away we go. your comments always welcome and appreciated. Sincerely, Moses

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/12/2009 9:23:00 AM

Beautiful writing Raul. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol

Margaret Okubo

Date: 10/12/2009 9:21:00 AM

Gosh !! Marvellous. This is a great Haiku with vivid imagery. Ezcellent Raul. Meg.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/12/2009 8:06:00 AM

Brilliant, Raul! Love the reference to "vintage sunshine." Great haiku from the King! Love, Carolyn

Michael Jordan

Date: 10/12/2009 7:18:00 AM

Raul this is a wonderful haiku - very vivid - God Bless, MJ

Sean Kelly

Date: 10/12/2009 3:49:00 AM

Cleverly named , perfect Haiku from the Master .....

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/12/2009 12:26:00 AM

i need some Sunrays Rauli need some sunshine lumining my life.. beautiful,magical Haiku-charma