Array of Sunrays

Luminous highlights,
Broad strokes of vintage sunshine:
Pastel reflections.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Owens Avatar
October 13, 2009 at 11:48 AM
This is beautiful...I love it! Marty
Knop Avatar
October 13, 2009 at 5:54 AM
Beautiful picture of autum, Raul! Nicely written. And thanky for your comments....Gert
Lopez Avatar
October 12, 2009 at 9:39 PM
the last line reminds me of the many mornings i wake up to on my way to school.....very nice raul!!!!
Fraser Avatar
October 12, 2009 at 12:19 PM
Brightly painted Haiku Raul, >> James
Harper Avatar
October 12, 2009 at 12:07 PM
Lovin the "vintage sunshine" thing
Freeman Avatar
October 12, 2009 at 9:38 AM
Brilliant Haiku Raul, Oh yea, sunshine in a bottle,and away we go. your comments always welcome and appreciated. Sincerely, Moses
Brown Avatar
October 12, 2009 at 9:23 AM
Beautiful writing Raul. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol
Okubo Avatar
October 12, 2009 at 9:21 AM
Gosh !! Marvellous. This is a great Haiku with vivid imagery. Ezcellent Raul. Meg.
Devonshire Avatar
October 12, 2009 at 8:06 AM
Brilliant, Raul! Love the reference to "vintage sunshine." Great haiku from the King! Love, Carolyn
Jordan Avatar
October 12, 2009 at 7:18 AM
Raul this is a wonderful haiku - very vivid - God Bless, MJ
Kelly Avatar
October 12, 2009 at 3:49 AM
Cleverly named , perfect Haiku from the Master .....
Chircop Avatar
October 12, 2009 at 12:26 AM
i need some Sunrays Rauli need some sunshine lumining my life.. beautiful,magical Haiku-charma
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