Around the Corner

As I walk downtown I see an alley 
Where a black cat sat staring up at me,
The sound of her purring was so soothing 
Lulled and hypnotized me how could that be.

With its green eyes lightning up the darkness 
I saw a sign was hanging that said Tea,
It seemed to be just around the corner
In an alley that led down to the sea.

I walk and the black cat seems to follow 
Awareness of her presence filled the air,
In a flash we turned around the corner 
Where stood an old stone building with one stair.

I looked to find the feline now missing,
Then climbed the step and gently pushed the door,
Cobwebs hung from rafters on the ceiling,
The wind made dust balls race across the floor.

I noticed tea of all sorts lined each wall,
The smells of herbs and spices filled my nose.
Sitting in a corner sat a woman,
Glaring at me sniffing a thorny rose.

Her eyes an emerald green that sparkled 
Her hair a shiny black darker then night,
By her stood a broom with crooked handle 
My senses told me something was not right.

I turned and ran while saying I’m sorry,
It seems I’m lost forgive me and good day,
Hearing horrid screeches I am shaking
Running around the corner in late May.

Soaked with sweat I run out to the main street 
People wonder why I’m carrying on,
As I shout loud, don’t go down this alley
I turn and notice that it now is gone.


Written by Brenda Meier-Hans 
10.17.2014
For Francine Roberts Contest 
Around the Corner 
2nd
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Hopper Avatar
March 4, 2015 at 1:38 PM
Love it
Poteet Avatar
December 31, 2014 at 2:23 PM
Quite graphic and full of images which frighten and make us sweat. A bad dream, a vision, a happening so real it defies words, yet you have described it so well. Congratulations! excellent for the prompt, around the corner, Brenda. Happy New Year 2015.
Yvonne Avatar
December 31, 2014 at 9:11 AM
Congratulations Brenda on a superb win. Happy New Year!
Yvonne Avatar
December 31, 2014 at 9:09 AM
I am back to this poem, as I read it again, I don't know what I was thinking, I knew it was a winner, I said as much. The point I am making is why did I not fav it till now BOING!!!!
Haight Avatar
December 31, 2014 at 8:38 AM
Brenda, I don't know how I missed reading this before. A great imaginative tale that keeps the reader's attention with such anticipation to know what happened! Congratulations your wonderful top place win! Hugs, Sandra
Allison Avatar
December 31, 2014 at 7:05 AM
so sorry I missed this spooky tale many congrats Brenda:-) Hugs jan xx
Kayode Avatar
December 31, 2014 at 1:38 AM
Congrats on the win with this great work Brenda...huggs
Roberts Avatar
December 31, 2014 at 1:33 AM
congrats on your win in the contest, well done
Fraser Avatar
October 20, 2014 at 3:23 PM
Terrific images Brenda, and the flowing was wonderful. It gave me a buzz reading it, nice one - James :)
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 20, 2014 at 6:56 PM
Thank you James.
Johnson Avatar
October 20, 2014 at 11:23 AM
Wake up, wake up Brenda, you're having a nightmare. :) Love the story. So fun to travel with you in your imagination. Peace. :)
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 20, 2014 at 6:55 PM
Thanks Robert.
Manassian Avatar
October 19, 2014 at 2:31 PM
You will do well in the contest, my dear. Superbly well. :) Cat turned witch turned...into NOTHING. SPOOKY! Hugs
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 19, 2014 at 8:45 PM
Thanks Eileen.
Devonshire Avatar
October 19, 2014 at 1:51 PM
Wow, you gave me chills, Brenda. Hair on my arms is still standing up. I LOVE the story you wove in verse and coming across that strange woman (perhaps a witch) kept my eyes glued to the screen. What a great Hitchcock-like twist at the end to find the alley is "gone." Brilliant! Francine is sure to love it. Sending winning wishes your way. Love, carolyn
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 19, 2014 at 8:44 PM
Thank you dear Carolyn, you are so kind.
Yvonne Avatar
October 19, 2014 at 11:08 AM
Oooo, spooky! This is a winner plain and simple. Superb!
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 19, 2014 at 12:18 PM
Thank you Maurice.
Eastman Avatar
October 18, 2014 at 4:07 PM
I love story poems. This one is perfect for Halloween.
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 18, 2014 at 4:32 PM
Thank you Carol.
Roper Avatar
October 17, 2014 at 10:51 PM
I agree with Dorian and Andrea, great effect and wonderful write. I am going to have to make sure I don't run across the black cat with the green eyes when I walk Peanut at night. Love eve
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 17, 2014 at 11:01 PM
Watch out for strange alleys Eve. Thanks for stopping by.
Petersen Potter Avatar
October 17, 2014 at 10:18 PM
Eh Brenda are you sure you didn't leave anything of yours behind? Hahahaaaaha, laughing and smiling both while read your humorous scary around the corner tale. Beware! That black witch will catch up with you by Halloween. Better have some garlic silver and crosses just in case she turns into a vampire and a werewolf too. :) lol. Love your poem! hope you do well in this contest! Meanwhile keep your doors and windows closed very tight! Hugs! Love and light! D.
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 17, 2014 at 10:59 PM
I did leave a package but it disappeared. Haha. Thanks Dorian.
Dietrich Avatar
October 17, 2014 at 10:07 PM
oohh very twilight zone like!!! GREAT story. It works well for the story contest as well as ARound the Corner!!
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 17, 2014 at 10:57 PM
Thanks Andrea, I finally found something for this one though.
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