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Around the Corner

petals on the breeeze bumblebees in willow trees- the sweet feel of Spring

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/6/2010 5:00:00 PM

Very nice! congratulations!

Deirdre Omaidin

Date: 2/4/2010 4:46:00 AM

so picturesque and so pleasing to the senses, how I wish it were here. Congratulations Déirdre

Sue Mason

Date: 2/3/2010 9:29:00 AM

Beautifully done as always, Brian! Congratulations on your win in Carol's contest! Great fun!!

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 2/3/2010 4:57:00 AM

Congratulations Brian on placing in Carol Brown’s “Waiting for Spring Haiku contest with these “rhyming springy” words. Your creativity is outstanding. Smiles, Dane Ann

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 2/2/2010 11:25:00 PM

Great creation of an Haiku, Brian! Congrats on your win in Carol's contest. Best wishes, Caroline.

Margaret Foster

Date: 2/2/2010 8:35:00 PM

I do miss the bumblebees, only honey bees here. thank you for the memory of big fat bumbles...Congratulations....Margaret

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/2/2010 6:03:00 PM

What a vision of spring...you have created a beautiful picture in my mind. Congratulations on this win, Brian. ~ Carrie

Laura Spears

Date: 2/2/2010 5:20:00 PM

This one just flows off the tongue or tumbles in the brain (silent reading) as well as being a beautiful description of spring.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/26/2010 10:26:00 AM

Thank you for your entry in my contest Brian. Love, Carol

Sean Kelly

Date: 1/26/2010 9:02:00 AM

I hope it is , Brian as this weather drives me around the bend . Best of luck in the contest ...

Lena Townsend

Date: 1/26/2010 6:51:00 AM

Excellent Haiku that makes me long for the season that brings with it so much new life. Smiles from Lolita

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/26/2010 5:46:00 AM

Hope this beauty is your entry to Carol's latest contest... so Springy ... my entry is Softly Springing.. Haiku is such great fun to write ... it presents such a challenge to the poet... with the syllable count... happy to hear u received the post from me and am soooooo looking forward to reading.... thankxxx ... luv with blessings... Linda-Marie

Jeralynn Clark

Date: 1/26/2010 5:37:00 AM

I see it all Brian! Jeralynn

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/26/2010 4:40:00 AM

There's a very "sweet" feeling in this haiku, Brian. The leaves on deciduous trees have already emerged in Florida, but the rest of the nation has to wait a while yet. Given the tough winter you've had in the UK, I bet you can't wait to hear those bumblebees. Nice haiku, Brian. Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/26/2010 4:15:00 AM

That is a long breeeze. Soon we hope. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara