Aromatic Ambiance Accessed

Along the ambrosial garden alleyway 
of assorted colors, it appeared we ambled together 
for ages, until an atrocious angst of afflicting storm 
blew away all the flowers abloom for us.

As apathy rent asunder my dreams gone awry
the embrace of the empty amorous arms 
avidly amassed the splinters of my shattered heart.
In the pull-apart arcane aperture of anguish
my ardent ardor dissipated away in thin arid air.

After all these agonizing years adrift alone,
a dazzling day dawned above the debris of hope.
With auspicious aura of attractive future fascinating
my appetency arose afresh as the dust of my dream.

The allure of the affable smile on your face aglow, 
I once adored, amply assured me I could assuage 
my acrid feeling and absolve myself of 
the abysmal attribution of abject remorse.

When I accessed your aromatic ambiance
in abandoned garden with vestige assembled again, 
I became an aspirant butterfly afloat 
with the tapestry of winged ecstasy 
on the adornment of your amazing beauty.

October 12, 2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Kauffman Avatar
March 11, 2020 at 12:54 PM
Acclaim and accolades for your amazing alliteration. Congratulations Subimal!
Adams Avatar
November 3, 2019 at 6:57 PM
this is so beautiful...congratulations on your win :)
Chiri Avatar
November 3, 2019 at 6:56 PM
You truly aced this congrats on your high win!;)
Hamilton Avatar
November 3, 2019 at 6:19 PM
This is such a beautiful write Subimal, congrats on a fine 2nd place win!
Sands Avatar
October 12, 2019 at 10:53 AM
Wow! This is amazing! I predict a top win for this poem. Beautifully written with the challenge of using those words. :)
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