Arms of Fall

In my lover’s arms of fall While caressed in his gentle shawl Laid the carpet for his foliage cloak October’s brush a vivid stroke While caressed in his gentle shawl Colors swirl like a masquerade ball October’s brush a vivid stroke Of loves delight he had just spoke Colors swirl like a masquerade ball Laid the carpet for his foliage cloak Of loves delight he had just spoke In my lover’s arms of fall written 10-6-2019 Poet's October Pantoum Cash Prize Poetry Contest Sponsored by: William Kekaula
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Hamilton Avatar
June 17, 2020 at 10:26 AM
Very nice write Jeanne, congrats on a fine placement!
Mcgee Avatar
June 17, 2020 at 11:20 AM
Thank you...nice to revisit a poem too!
Laurie Avatar
October 7, 2019 at 10:52 PM
Hello Jeanne … the rustic colours of autumn are here for all to see in your poem that has some classic lines indeed - thank you Jeanne - Lindsay
Mcgee Avatar
October 8, 2019 at 1:33 PM
thanks for the visit...I'm glad you enjoyed.
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October 7, 2019 at 1:55 PM
"Colors swirl like a masquerade ball October’s brush a vivid stroke Of loves delight he had just spoke" A darling missive for this contest Jeanne.
Mcgee Avatar
October 7, 2019 at 4:31 PM
I was pondering for days a different take on fall that wouldn't see cliche. It makes me feel good as a poetess that you like it Caren!
Dutta Avatar
October 6, 2019 at 11:39 PM
BEAUTIFUL. All the best. Blessing
Mcgee Avatar
October 7, 2019 at 4:30 PM
that also is beautiful...your words... thank you
Mcintosh Avatar
October 6, 2019 at 9:14 PM
This is a lovely poem for the contest... just perfect. I wish you a win and God bless you always, Gina
Mcgee Avatar
October 6, 2019 at 9:27 PM
Hello Gina...I hope it tickles everyone's heart...fall's colors make me swoon. I'm so glad you liked it. xoxo
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