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Arms of Fall

In my lover’s arms of fall While caressed in his gentle shawl Laid the carpet for his foliage cloak October’s brush a vivid stroke While caressed in his gentle shawl Colors swirl like a masquerade ball October’s brush a vivid stroke Of loves delight he had just spoke Colors swirl like a masquerade ball Laid the carpet for his foliage cloak Of loves delight he had just spoke In my lover’s arms of fall written 10-6-2019 Poet's October Pantoum Cash Prize Poetry Contest Sponsored by: William Kekaula

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Date: 6/17/2020 10:26:00 AM
Very nice write Jeanne, congrats on a fine placement!
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 6/17/2020 11:20:00 AM
Thank you...nice to revisit a poem too!
Date: 10/7/2019 10:52:00 PM
Hello Jeanne … the rustic colours of autumn are here for all to see in your poem that has some classic lines indeed - thank you Jeanne - Lindsay
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 10/8/2019 1:33:00 PM
thanks for the visit...I'm glad you enjoyed.
Date: 10/7/2019 1:55:00 PM
"Colors swirl like a masquerade ball October’s brush a vivid stroke Of loves delight he had just spoke" A darling missive for this contest Jeanne.
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 10/7/2019 4:31:00 PM
I was pondering for days a different take on fall that wouldn't see cliche. It makes me feel good as a poetess that you like it Caren!
Date: 10/6/2019 11:39:00 PM
BEAUTIFUL. All the best. Blessing
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 10/7/2019 4:30:00 PM
that also is beautiful...your words... thank you
Date: 10/6/2019 9:14:00 PM
This is a lovely poem for the contest... just perfect. I wish you a win and God bless you always, Gina
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 10/6/2019 9:27:00 PM
Hello Gina...I hope it tickles everyone's heart...fall's colors make me swoon. I'm so glad you liked it. xoxo

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