Arms In Rhapsody

Somewhere between our song, he is there like a delicacy on my tongue; on my fingertips he burns the silence on my eyelids, and even the pang that he leaves is a blaze in itself. And what is compelling about the maleness of this star is how his glance can still reach me in circles of adagio movements even when he is not around. As fast as speeding thought, he rules over me… sending a thousand revolving wings to shade me from the sun, fountains to wash me away… then i am gone, done into the rhapsody of his arms. And even the pang that he leaves is a fire in itself that simmers like oil in me… till the falling of another evening, when once again he takes his laughter in my sky to flare in my heart like a night keeper rising an octave of love’s syncopated heaves, trailing one beat ahead of me. Favorite Love Poem Contest Sponsor: Nayda Ivette Negron
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A  Avatar
December 17, 2015 at 12:49 PM
NETTE, CONGRATULATIONS on your nice win. ~SKAT~
Crisci Avatar
December 16, 2015 at 2:08 PM
Congratulations on your big win, Nette. You continue to stupefy me with your magnificent verses. This one goes straight into my favorites. Christmas is almost here and I like to extend my wishes for A Very Happy Christmas to you and your loved ones! Hugs, Andrew.
Carber Avatar
December 16, 2015 at 10:01 AM
'circles of adagio movements', beautiful; 'love's syncopated heaves', a perfect image. I know it's a damn good poem when I wish I had written it! You have me envy, girl!
Scars Avatar
December 15, 2015 at 5:56 PM
Beautiful nette...*smiles*
Haight Avatar
December 15, 2015 at 4:02 PM
Lovely, Nette. Congratulations on your win and placement. Hugs, Sandra
Hamilton Avatar
December 15, 2015 at 11:55 AM
Congrats, very nice imagery.
Negron Flores Avatar
December 15, 2015 at 10:26 AM
Congratulations on the placement of the contest Nette.
Y. Avatar
August 25, 2015 at 10:17 PM
Nette, I just stopped by to say congratulations on your big win:-)Alexis
Ebbs Avatar
August 25, 2015 at 7:15 PM
WooHoo, great job and congrats!
Rebstock Avatar
August 25, 2015 at 5:42 PM
Wonderful poem
Ryerson Avatar
August 25, 2015 at 11:04 AM
Congratulations my friend, you are one of the best at writing sensual, romantic poetry. LOVE the way you have used classical music as the centerpiece of this gem...Your poems sing to me - Tim
A. Sharma Avatar
August 25, 2015 at 2:32 AM
Ah nette what a romantic marvel! Congrats on big win!
A  Avatar
August 24, 2015 at 10:52 PM
Nette. Congratulations on your sweet Romantic WIN... SKAT
A  Avatar
February 26, 2014 at 6:18 PM
Wonderful poem, Nette., Congratulations, on your win, thank you for sharing, and helping the reader Feel The emotions of Love through your poem. ~SKAT~
Jerden Avatar
February 21, 2014 at 8:48 AM
Wonderful use of musical metaphors and quite sensual imagery. Congratulations, Nette!
A. Sharma Avatar
February 21, 2014 at 4:05 AM
Amazing Netty! Feelings beautifully expressed! Congrats on ur win !!
Nair Avatar
February 21, 2014 at 3:50 AM
This is wonderful. Congrats, Nette!!
Kayode Avatar
February 19, 2014 at 8:02 PM
Congrats on the win Nette. A great work you did here,
Puddifoot Avatar
February 19, 2014 at 5:34 PM
nette, this one just had to take 1st place! some beautiful imagery and lines; romantic and haunting, polished and flawlessly executed - congrats on your win in my contest! :)
Devnath  Avatar
February 15, 2014 at 8:55 AM
Yes, the last line boosts up the miracle here. Excellent feeling is brought in to poetic words. Lovely done my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
Eggins Avatar
February 15, 2014 at 5:37 AM
Ahhh this is poetry, lovely work Nette there are times I sit back and sigh after I read a poem this is one of them 7 from me and fav'd, thanks for the read and the comment on my poem it was appreciated love Jayne x
Jones Avatar
February 14, 2014 at 8:17 PM
In love with all these words...before and after I had to find a couple in the dictionary...ahhh nette your words oooze..beauty
Jones Avatar
February 15, 2014 at 7:56 AM
Showing my ignorance again.:-) :-) :-) loving learning these lovely lovely words...thank you for being so awesome
Enriquez Avatar
February 14, 2014 at 4:55 PM
Dear Nette: So nice, the way your words flow into pictures-moments. Lovely feelings in-sync with heart and soul. Leon
Carrillo Avatar
February 14, 2014 at 4:03 PM
This is so, so beautiful and so relaxing to read. Thank you so much. Many blessings and happy Valentine's day.... Lucilla
Smith Avatar
February 14, 2014 at 2:38 PM
Quite beautiful nette.....Hugs Tim
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