Arms In Rhapsody

Somewhere between our song, he is there like a delicacy on my tongue; on my fingertips he burns the silence on my eyelids, and even the pang that he leaves is a blaze in itself. And what is compelling about the maleness of this star is how his glance can still reach me in circles of adagio movements even when he is not around. As fast as speeding thought, he rules over me… sending a thousand revolving wings to shade me from the sun, fountains to wash me away… then i am gone, done into the rhapsody of his arms. And even the pang that he leaves is a fire in itself that simmers like oil in me… till the falling of another evening, when once again he takes his laughter in my sky to flare in my heart like a night keeper rising an octave of love’s syncopated heaves, trailing one beat ahead of me. Favorite Love Poem Contest Sponsor: Nayda Ivette Negron

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Date: 12/17/2015 12:49:00 PM
NETTE, CONGRATULATIONS on your nice win. ~SKAT~
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Date: 12/16/2015 2:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your big win, Nette. You continue to stupefy me with your magnificent verses. This one goes straight into my favorites. Christmas is almost here and I like to extend my wishes for A Very Happy Christmas to you and your loved ones! Hugs, Andrew.
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Date: 12/16/2015 10:01:00 AM
'circles of adagio movements', beautiful; 'love's syncopated heaves', a perfect image. I know it's a damn good poem when I wish I had written it! You have me envy, girl!
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Date: 12/15/2015 5:56:00 PM
Beautiful nette...*smiles*
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Date: 12/15/2015 4:02:00 PM
Lovely, Nette. Congratulations on your win and placement. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 12/15/2015 11:55:00 AM
Congrats, very nice imagery.
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Date: 12/15/2015 10:26:00 AM
Congratulations on the placement of the contest Nette.
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Date: 8/25/2015 10:17:00 PM
Nette, I just stopped by to say congratulations on your big win:-)Alexis
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Date: 8/25/2015 7:15:00 PM
WooHoo, great job and congrats!
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Date: 8/25/2015 5:42:00 PM
Wonderful poem
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Date: 8/25/2015 11:04:00 AM
Congratulations my friend, you are one of the best at writing sensual, romantic poetry. LOVE the way you have used classical music as the centerpiece of this gem...Your poems sing to me - Tim
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Date: 8/25/2015 2:32:00 AM
Ah nette what a romantic marvel! Congrats on big win!
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Date: 8/24/2015 10:52:00 PM
Nette. Congratulations on your sweet Romantic WIN... SKAT
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Date: 2/26/2014 6:18:00 PM
Wonderful poem, Nette., Congratulations, on your win, thank you for sharing, and helping the reader Feel The emotions of Love through your poem. ~SKAT~
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Date: 2/21/2014 8:48:00 AM
Wonderful use of musical metaphors and quite sensual imagery. Congratulations, Nette!
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Date: 2/21/2014 4:05:00 AM
Amazing Netty! Feelings beautifully expressed! Congrats on ur win !!
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Date: 2/21/2014 3:50:00 AM
This is wonderful. Congrats, Nette!!
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Date: 2/19/2014 8:02:00 PM
Congrats on the win Nette. A great work you did here,
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Date: 2/19/2014 5:34:00 PM
nette, this one just had to take 1st place! some beautiful imagery and lines; romantic and haunting, polished and flawlessly executed - congrats on your win in my contest! :)
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Date: 2/15/2014 8:55:00 AM
Yes, the last line boosts up the miracle here. Excellent feeling is brought in to poetic words. Lovely done my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 2/15/2014 5:37:00 AM
Ahhh this is poetry, lovely work Nette there are times I sit back and sigh after I read a poem this is one of them 7 from me and fav'd, thanks for the read and the comment on my poem it was appreciated love Jayne x
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Date: 2/14/2014 8:17:00 PM
In love with all these words...before and after I had to find a couple in the dictionary...ahhh nette your words oooze..beauty
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Date: 2/15/2014 7:56:00 AM
Showing my ignorance again.:-) :-) :-) loving learning these lovely lovely words...thank you for being so awesome
Date: 2/14/2014 4:55:00 PM
Dear Nette: So nice, the way your words flow into pictures-moments. Lovely feelings in-sync with heart and soul. Leon
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Date: 2/14/2014 4:03:00 PM
This is so, so beautiful and so relaxing to read. Thank you so much. Many blessings and happy Valentine's day.... Lucilla
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Date: 2/14/2014 2:38:00 PM
Quite beautiful nette.....Hugs Tim
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