Raul Moreno Poet Acrostic

Aries

An artistic  aurA
Resides in a jaR
I smell BacardI 
Eager   to  tastE
Satisfying  sudS



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* An acrostic on both ends.
Inspired by Danielle White's 
Acrostic Astrology contest.

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Laurie Ginn March 11, 2009 at 3:43 AM Just like you Raul, always finding a new way to put an interesting twist on something ordinary~

Lena Townsend March 3, 2009 at 6:56 AM Sounds like a fun Aries to me. Good luck in the contest! Smiles from Lolita

Daniel Neal February 24, 2009 at 2:57 AM Double the fu, writing poem is an art and you have mastered it. DN

Belinda Parish February 23, 2009 at 9:20 PM Very clever, Raul

Chris Goombi February 23, 2009 at 1:55 AM Nice thoughts on this one, I agree with Carrie on this one, it needs a twist of lime. -Boo

Tyler Martin February 23, 2009 at 1:21 AM Your creative mind never lets you down, gret job and best of luck in the contest. Tyler

Elizabeth Neal February 23, 2009 at 1:05 AM Good luck in the contest this one is genius. Love E.

Sharon Winter February 22, 2009 at 4:33 AM Wow. Leave it to you to be doubly creative! Brilliant! Good luck! Love, Shar

Robin L. Gass February 21, 2009 at 5:17 PM Awesome job with this challenge, Raul. Very clever doing the double acrostic! Good luck in the contest! Love, Robin

Carrie Richards February 21, 2009 at 8:25 AM I like this one very much....a little twist of lime in the Bacardi might win this contest !! Great job! ~ Carrie

Arany P. February 21, 2009 at 4:59 AM haha!! you sure know how to do it!! lovely thought.... and great truth... in this zodiac sign!! ~ Arany

Christopher Higgins February 21, 2009 at 4:56 AM Well done my friend..love the flow to this piece and the bacardi bit is funny..

Barbara Gorelick February 20, 2009 at 9:21 PM You clever thing you..this is so creative...lets have a "suds" together...BG