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Aries

An artistic aurA Resides in a jaR I smell BacardI Eager to tastE Satisfying sudS ______________________ * An acrostic on both ends. Inspired by Danielle White's Acrostic Astrology contest.

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Date: 3/11/2009 3:43:00 AM
Just like you Raul, always finding a new way to put an interesting twist on something ordinary~
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Date: 3/3/2009 6:56:00 AM
Sounds like a fun Aries to me. Good luck in the contest! Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 2/24/2009 2:57:00 AM
Double the fu, writing poem is an art and you have mastered it. DN
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Date: 2/23/2009 9:20:00 PM
Very clever, Raul
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Date: 2/23/2009 1:55:00 AM
Nice thoughts on this one, I agree with Carrie on this one, it needs a twist of lime. -Boo
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Date: 2/23/2009 1:21:00 AM
Your creative mind never lets you down, gret job and best of luck in the contest. Tyler
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Date: 2/23/2009 1:05:00 AM
Good luck in the contest this one is genius. Love E.
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Date: 2/22/2009 4:33:00 AM
Wow. Leave it to you to be doubly creative! Brilliant! Good luck! Love, Shar
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Date: 2/21/2009 5:17:00 PM
Awesome job with this challenge, Raul. Very clever doing the double acrostic! Good luck in the contest! Love, Robin
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Date: 2/21/2009 8:25:00 AM
I like this one very much....a little twist of lime in the Bacardi might win this contest !! Great job! ~ Carrie
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Date: 2/21/2009 4:59:00 AM
haha!! you sure know how to do it!! lovely thought.... and great truth... in this zodiac sign!! ~ Arany
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Date: 2/21/2009 4:56:00 AM
Well done my friend..love the flow to this piece and the bacardi bit is funny..
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Date: 2/20/2009 9:21:00 PM
You clever thing you..this is so creative...lets have a "suds" together...BG
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