Argentine Tango - Collaboration

Moonlight captures the freshness of blue

but my eyes are affixed to the beauty of you


ripples brush rhythmically along with the night

my chamber beats faster while I hold you so tight

 
our silence is broken by the sound of my heartbeat

your nearness succumbs sending shivers to my feet


here the twilight, searches for the words unspoken

whispered in my dreams, to a heart that was broken


kisses they long, to be felt on your lips

strong hands gripping excite on your hips


lean into me, lie your chest on my soul

you, mi amour, I shall never let go

 
salt tainted tears fill my eyes as I snuggled up close

Cariad I mouthed my heart you never shall lose

 
pull into me and push your inhibitions aside

in passionate throes our fears cannot hide


I entwined my legs round your radiant heat

we're making love to an argentine beat


sweat runs down my breast as the tempo does rise

the climax so deafening with our loud tango cries


used Picture No 2

penned 20 December 2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 4/21/2018 4:49:00 PM
Belated congrats on your win with this fine collaborative poem, Seren.
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Date: 1/22/2018 5:40:00 AM
Congrats...blistered fingers in burn accident
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Seren Roberts
Date: 1/22/2018 8:39:00 PM
thanks Lin...have you really burnt yourself?....Seren
Date: 1/21/2018 4:00:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Seren:-) hugs jan xx
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Seren Roberts
Date: 1/22/2018 8:41:00 PM
thanks Jan the 4 of us did well...Seren
Date: 1/21/2018 5:12:00 AM
A beautiful tango Seren...Congrats on your win in my contest..
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Date: 12/23/2017 3:51:00 PM
A great collaboration! Mery Christamas and many blessings Seren. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 12/22/2017 12:45:00 AM
I have no idea how that photo was leaked, but amazing poem!!!!!! :)
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Tim Smith
Date: 12/22/2017 10:48:00 AM
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Date: 12/21/2017 2:24:00 PM
what a passionate dance my friend :-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/20/2017 4:07:00 PM
Amazing Seren...a perfect depiction of the photo
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Seren Roberts
Date: 12/20/2017 4:30:00 PM
Thank you I had an amazing co author....Seren
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