Are You Who You Say You Are?

Are you who you say you are
Or is it just a ruse
Who are our leaders
In literal abuse?
 
In a competitive world
As we share our work
Do we waste our time
In this murky quirk
 
There are angels and demons
Who hide among us
They stand by our shoulders
Their front, as they discuss us
 
Is it deliberation
They read us by chance
Or misrepresentation
They just give us a glance
 
Questions need answers
Reads need to be right
Equality breeds parity
It's either black or white
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 10/22/2009 4:36:00 PM
just like the nation saw in the famous O. J Simpson Trial a part of the nation turned it's back on the truth. and even perpetuated the lie to it's own brothers and sisters as angels wittnessed. i couldn't believe it myself but i saw. jhl
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Date: 10/22/2009 6:49:00 AM
I have enjoyed every poem I have read of yours, lovely words and wisdom. Thank you for your kind comments. Pam
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Date: 10/21/2009 2:48:00 PM
As usual, James, this is excellent! I truly admire your work. This is clearly, thought provoking! One sure thing is, a lie will not stand forever. That's my belief. Sooner or later the heart speaks. (Smile) Peace, Audrey
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Date: 10/20/2009 1:58:00 PM
this poem carries doubts and unanswered questions..do i get it James?..i love words black on white.. but it seems yes in life we meet people..who have two faces..poem full of wisdom--Charma
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Date: 10/20/2009 10:52:00 AM
I love your masterful poetry here James. For yes there are questions that need answers, the media reads need to be right. And the demons are blended in with the angels, and hard to know which is which. Sincerely, Moses
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Date: 10/20/2009 9:36:00 AM
Thank you for presenting your wonderful poetry to us today. It was an enjoyable read for me. Thank you James. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/20/2009 8:42:00 AM
Hi, thanks for your comment. I enjoyed reading this wonderful piece. I like how the words flow together. Keep God's words flowing from your heart. Continuted success!! Donielle S.
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Date: 10/20/2009 6:41:00 AM
Nice...Thanks for the congrates for my piece "Featured for the week"...Jimmy
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Date: 10/20/2009 12:53:00 AM
AMEN! lOVE, LAINIE
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Date: 10/19/2009 9:35:00 PM
Thank you for your kind remarks, James. regarding this poem, I am a big fan of rhythm and rhyme, so you know that I like this one from you. I also like the message here.
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Date: 10/19/2009 4:17:00 PM
Thought and effort went in here. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 10/19/2009 3:34:00 PM
James .. enjoyed reading this stirring verse by u.. and the title makes one dig deeper into themselves ... wonderful job .. Linda-Marie
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Date: 10/19/2009 3:31:00 PM
Amen to this, James! Couldn't agree more -- but of course you already know that! I can see the "angels and demons" lining up on different sides of the hall now. Into which category does each false friend fall? Awesome and a favorite! Love, Carolyn
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