Are You Skew-Whiff

Are You Skew-Whiff?

				Are you feeling rather skew-whiff?
Awkwardly placed and standing?
		upside-down
		back to front
		inside      out
		topsy - turvy
							Are your senses damp and unresponsive,
					Beckoning confusion and despair? 
	Does your heart pound even when there’s nothing exciting there?

   Forlorn, sorrowful, despondent, 
			     You patronise your grief, 
	      						Focus on your problem, 
		To attain some relief; 
You keep flitting to your pleasures, 
	Lack, for contemplation, a quiet place, 
				Force your troubles into the backroom, 
		You’re not to dignify your face. 
								Tomorrow is for thinking, 
	    Will exist to accommodate, 
			The glumness and the wretchedness, 
         That seems to obliqueness and gloom proliferate. 	

Rhoda Monihan 


13th October 2015


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October 27, 2015 at 9:38 PM
Rhoda,, Wonderful win. SKAT
Cheema Avatar
October 26, 2015 at 9:47 AM
Cingrats Rhoda on your well deseved win! Balveen
Webb Avatar
October 26, 2015 at 1:08 PM
Thanks balveen. Sometimes I have just felt that everything's skew-whiff!
A. Sharma Avatar
October 26, 2015 at 1:07 AM
Congrats on superb win Rhoda with this wonderful creative layout and poetry!
Inman Avatar
October 25, 2015 at 5:08 PM
Very good, Rhoda. Lovely words.
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October 25, 2015 at 1:08 PM
Creative thinking, Rhoda. Our senses are not always so cooperative! Congrats on a merited win. ~ Regards // paul
Webb Avatar
October 25, 2015 at 1:43 PM
Thanks paul
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