Are You Proud

Are you proud of what you did? 
Adding another blow?
You brought back a shattered past I long to escape.
I bet you didn't even know.

What you did was a violation..any innocence I fought to get back is gone.
All progress surely vanished, and yet you chose to carry on.

Once wasn't enough. I have never met you before this in all my life.
You kept coming back uninvited, making my fear something that ran rife.

Once again I was made afraid and unsafe, scared to be in my own home.
I keep searching for some peace..
Sadly, I believe my pain will always stay with me... forever etched in stone.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 5/19/2017 1:10:00 PM
You are very good! I enjoy reading your work, even though they make me sad sometimes. Well done! - Dean
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Laken Smith
Date: 5/19/2017 1:47:00 PM
thank you Dean :)
Date: 5/9/2017 3:46:00 PM
This is a very deep, sad poem. I always hate knowing that poems like this are born from tragedy and pain, but they're so beautiful in their darkness that I cannot tear my eyes away. This poem is incredible. Thank you.
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Date: 5/9/2017 4:46:00 PM
Thank you so much. I have enjoyed sharing them and also reading yours. I wrote this for a stranger who was stalking me. I don't think evil people realize the impact they have on others.
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