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Are You Listening, God

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When we realize 'God is listening,'

we can level with ourselves...

Are You listening, God? I'm not perfect; I'm flawed-- Spoke not the truth; 'twas all fraud. And did they applaud? Hah! They guffawed. Are You listening, God? I'm weak; I'm not tough: Not strong, a creampuff; Like twinkies, cotton candy, fluff. Are You listening, God? I thought I was brilliant; I was dull: My 'great ideas' all came to null. No genius was I; I had a numb skull. Are You listening, God? Then hear my plea: I confess to my abysmal condition; Have mercy on me and on my petition. Why SHOULD You help, You say? Isn't it enough that I pray? Well, You're right. I need to do better; I need to improve. I need not to grumble; I need to be humble. I need not to curse and make things worse when I stumble. And now that I've tumbled,... I need to show that I mean it when I say I'll do better; A man's word is his bond, right down to the last letter. I'm going to improve! You just wait and see. So, thanks for having this little pep talk with me!

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Date: 12/9/2018 9:31:00 PM
wow so wonderfully talking with GOD//// beautiful poem// like it
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/9/2018 9:38:00 PM
Wow, Mahtab! You went way back to dig this one out. Thank you for your kind words and encouragement. Best wishes, Gershon
Date: 2/25/2018 9:50:00 AM
I second Line, you are adorable.
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 2/25/2018 5:33:00 PM
Heh, Line started it ;)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/25/2018 4:31:00 PM
Oh, Maureen! I'm blushing a bit here. Thank you! --God bless you, Gershon
Date: 2/24/2018 10:15:00 PM
O Gershon, I think you're an adorable little creampuff and that was an absolutely delightful little pep talk you let us in on.
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