Are We There Yet, I Really Have To Pee

This is something other than unsure laced with heavy heart.
I'd love to change my mind,  is this where you take charge?
When our play begins, the starring role I'm begging you to take.
Open your eyes, I won't sit around and wait.
Would you instantly be swooned if I could be your tin foil dream?
Would you cook me in a spoon, shoot me right through your blood stream?
A rush that lasts longer than fifteen seconds, a force that beckons for all of your attention.
I want to illuminate the dark corners, where you hide the  secrets that border,
The hurt that you and I refuse to admit, the **** that resides far beneath the surface,
Those things that just never quite seem fit and yet we both allow them to exist.
Between a cut and a hole, is there really a difference at all?
Knowing what I know, why do I keep interest in something I cannot control?
She's got what you need and she's got you by the balls,
I have nothing that can compare to her thralls.
But this is just an embellishment of events as seen in my head.
This is my heart written on paper that cannot be read. Maybe if I do it like this, it will make more sense.
I hope you'll let me find solace in you because I know I can do better but I don't want to believe it is true.
This where I lose rhythm and ask you to lie and tell me you'll do anything, but darling don't take the time to try.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 4/26/2016 8:25:00 AM
Hi Briana. Congrats for having your piece featured in the Poetry Soup homepage!!! ;-)
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Date: 6/5/2015 12:03:00 AM
LOL, love the poem Briana, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Briana Baker
Date: 6/5/2015 1:40:00 PM
Thank you! This is one of my favorites. Its an oldie but goodie! Please feel free to give me opinions! -briana
Date: 6/3/2015 12:36:00 PM
- Congratulations on your first poems here at P-Soup - A pleasure to welcome you, Briana :) - Hope you will find this page interesting and post many more thoughts and words in the future - Good luck :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/5/2015 1:38:00 PM
I plan to let it all out on here, please continue to read and share your thoughts! All words are welcome. -briana
Date: 6/2/2015 10:06:00 PM
Briana, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 6/5/2015 1:37:00 PM
Ive found such a welcoming community of artists here, thank you for your support!-briana
Date: 6/2/2015 3:42:00 PM
Hey Briana, a warm welcome to Poetry Soup! It would appear you have stored up much inside yourself and are bursting open with ideas with so many entries. Be Blessed, Neva
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Date: 6/5/2015 1:37:00 PM
Thank you so much for your feedback! I appreciate your thoughts! -Briana
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