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Are Horses As Brave As Cowboys

Their bridled haunt, each day may be their last; yeehaw.* The narrow way, down mountainside, and clop of shoes. The saddlebags dip left and right in gait and gnaw. The spirit wind and pouring rain their hoofs refuse. Begs me to ask, “Are horses as brave as cowboys?” Lights’ heads bowed low to the path of perilous sight. The kick of spurred heel, a “Giddyap,” of steel, “Go boy!” They’re made to trek down mountainsides as stones ignite. What’s turned ‘round the head of Roy, his slack rope in lead? This corral dust, no it is fact, the slip and slide** of horse-hide, ain’t no dignity of his tan breed. No grave for him, his service blow is bonafide. The cowboys “yip” and “holla” spittoon-chew and cussed. Ornery snorts, flyswatter tails replay course sounds. The clinch mountain, after hazardous ride, kicked dust in snout of grieving herd; and buckskins stood their ground. 1/20/2021 Cowboy Poetry Sponsor: Line Gauthier *yeehaw - used to express delight. Here I’ve used sarcasm. **corral dust - lies and tall tales ***clinch mountain - rye whiskey HMS used for 12 syllable count. Site was off on 2 lines.

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Date: 2/4/2021 7:45:00 AM
Hi Kim, Congratulations on your win:-)Alexis
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Date: 2/4/2021 6:32:00 AM
Braver than some, I think. Nice perspective Kim. Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/4/2021 10:32:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 1/22/2021 1:17:00 PM
This is a real cowboy poem! Wow! I want to yell "Yee Hah!"
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/22/2021 4:40:00 PM
Woot woot! Thank you, Caren!
Date: 1/21/2021 11:58:00 AM
Lively cowboy poem. Amazing job.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/21/2021 2:12:00 PM
Thank you, Juliet!
Date: 1/21/2021 2:51:00 AM
A very well written Cowboy poem Kim, fantastic lingo. Are horses brave, who would know, if horses could talk yes or no they’d say, as it is they can only neigh and nod their heads their thoughts to relay... Belle
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/21/2021 5:46:00 AM
Thank you, Belle!
Date: 1/20/2021 9:01:00 PM
Horses are marvelous animals. Amazingly powerful but inately gentle and like most herbivores they are timid. Don't make the mistake of thinking they won't fight back though. lol As for the cowboys, I live in Alberta and it has been my experience that the fact a man is a cowboy does not necessarily mean he is a horseman. Great write here Kim. God Bless, JB
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/21/2021 5:47:00 AM
Thanks for your interesting comment! Cowboys aren’t always horseman. God bless you, sweet friend!
Date: 1/20/2021 4:41:00 PM
Wow! Where'd you get all that cowboy lingo, Ringo?!... Just want to have a little fun with your title. Gonna rearrange a couple of letters: "Are Horses as Brave as Cows, Boy?!" Alternatively, with more rearranging: "Are Horses Brave? -- As Cows, Boy. Yeeha! ~ Giddy Up Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/20/2021 8:51:00 PM
LOL...love it, Gershon!
Date: 1/20/2021 1:31:00 PM
Learned a lot about cowboy lingo in your poem, Kim. The horse and the cowboy were special together in daring journey. Your write is special depicting those sights and sounds.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/20/2021 3:53:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay!
Date: 1/20/2021 1:13:00 PM
Lively cowboy story with the hors taking the lead. ~~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/20/2021 3:53:00 PM
Thank you, Victor!
Date: 1/20/2021 9:58:00 AM
Well if I was going down a mountain on horseback I'd like to think they were. I can just picture the nail-biting scene lol. Good luck in the contest, hope you are well Kim. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/20/2021 3:53:00 PM
Whatever comes to mind. Thank you!

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