Arduousness

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What are your identity and name? are you on the town’s outskirts? are you struggling to get in and take? or slit your throat and stop this nonsense stay happy when dying in the dark don't burn in hell or let Satan steal your soul. Written: November 07, 2022

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Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 11/8/2022 8:18:00 AM

A finely crafted, thought provoking poem. Hope your day is a good one, Evelyn :)

Bill Baker

Date: 11/8/2022 8:08:00 AM

Our minds have such a great capacity to create light or darkness. Your poem speaks of the awareness of the seemingly meaningless world we live in. Sometimes we are tempted to give in to evil thoughts and give up the light within. We must resist the evil and seek the vision of light and truth. As Christ said, "fear not for I have overcome the world." I sometimes feel I cannot overcome the hate and disfunction of this world any longer, but with Him I can. My spirit is with you, Bill

Valsa George

Date: 11/7/2022 7:58:00 PM

"Never let Satan take your soul".... Well said !