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Arduousness

What are your identity and name?
are you on the town’s outskirts?
are you struggling to get in and take?
or slit your throat and stop this nonsense
stay happy when dying in the dark
don't burn in hell or let Satan steal your soul.

Written: November 07, 2022

analogybereavementfree verse

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Evelyn Judy Buehler

November 8, 2022 at 8:18 AM

A finely crafted, thought provoking poem. Hope your day is a good one, Evelyn :)

Bill Baker

November 8, 2022 at 8:08 AM

Our minds have such a great capacity to create light or darkness. Your poem speaks of the awareness of the seemingly meaningless world we live in. Sometimes we are tempted to give in to evil thoughts and give up the light within. We must resist the evil and seek the vision of light and truth. As Christ said, "fear not for I have overcome the world." I sometimes feel I cannot overcome the hate and disfunction of this world any longer, but with Him I can. My spirit is with you, Bill